TEAM AWAY: Quid pro quo, "A Moment's Consideration"

Jun 23, 2008 19:20

Title: A Moment's Consideration
Author: monanotlisa
Team: Away
Prompt: Quid pro quo
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard (other pairings in past & background)
Rating: R
Warnings: none given
Summary: The road taken.
Author's Notes: My most profuse thanks to four ladies without whom -- no hyperbole -- the story wouldn't exist like this: busaikko, who was there for me when I ( Read more... )

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incidental_fire June 23 2008, 19:06:54 UTC
Oh, marvelous. I'm generally a fan of AUs where we can see how relatively minor changes (i.e., Rodney's father leaving) could have much larger impacts later. The idea of Ronon and Cadman working together on cases cracked me up! And yes, I would not want to have to face *any* of them in court! Everyone seemed very IC, and their voices were spot-on. I particularly liked the nod to Rachel Luttrell's actual hair - nicely done!

All around, a nice blend of humor and angst and fun.

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incidental_fire June 23 2008, 19:21:54 UTC
I was going to - manfully! - refrain from commenting, but apart from the need to say, AW, THANKS!, I really wanted to tell you how it made me smile that the very first feedback captured several elements envisioned while writing the story, v. notably Teyla's hair. ;)

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keyairreem June 25 2008, 02:00:12 UTC
Ditto! HEHEHEHE

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the_cephalopod June 23 2008, 19:39:39 UTC
What a great AU! I love how you've woven canon throughout & Ronon and Cadman are superb! cep xxx

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emeraldsword June 23 2008, 19:52:45 UTC
ooh, this was nice. Poor John, but Rodney saved the day, yeay!

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sgamadison June 23 2008, 20:49:03 UTC
Rodney as a cut-throat lawyer makes frightening sense. I loved all the cameo appearances too. Comparing Cadman and John was a nice touch as well--I'd never really thought about the similarities of personality there before!

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aurora_84 June 23 2008, 21:57:11 UTC
Ooooh, fascinating, fabulous AU! I had a great time reading it.

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