TEAM AWAY: Eleventh hour, "Less to Say"

[trobadora]

Title: Less to Say
Author: flatlanddan
Team: Away
Prompt: Eleventh hour
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: R
Warnings: Rating is entirely for language.
Summary: This place is kinda weird. Not life sucking aliens weird, but still kinda weird.

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Comments

[ladyoflisquill]

I cried, honest to god cried, when Rodney showed and Teyla and Ronan and Elizabeth proclaiming Atlantis!

In an Away story you've created an amzing sense of home!

[sgamadison]

I enjoyed this story tremendously--leave it to Rodney not only to come but to come in style. And to bring Teyla and Ronon and all the Athosians. And the puddlejumper! My heart just melted. The espistlary style of the story was great, the tale unfolding in John's increasingly desperate letters and emails. When the series ends, no matter *how* it ends, I will find myself thinking this is where they all end up--Carson and Elizabeth too.

[wesleysgirl]

Wonderful! The thought of John writing those letters without any answer is so heartbreaking. And he got a dog! (That photo! So awesome.) And the dog's name is June. Great job. :-)

[shara50]

This was totaly perfectet!!

[rushhour]

I could never get enough of forced-to-abandon-Atlantis stories, as sad as they are, and this just hit the spot (even though it wasn't too sad and loads more hopeful). I love how much John shows he cares in his letters even though he can't seem to say them out loud. -content sigh- Loved it all~