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TEAM AWAY: Dead Ringer, "By Whirlwind Scattered"

Jun 18, 2008 19:32

Title: By Whirlwind Scattered
Author: busaikko
Team: Away
Prompt: Dead Ringer
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: trust yourself above all; character death of two utterly unnamed red-shirts
Summary: On the seventeenth day after the jumper crashed, Rodney realized that the man he was stranded with was not John Sheppard. (5,700 words)
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Comments 141

almostnever June 18 2008, 18:21:05 UTC

I love this up until it takes a sudden left turn into creepiness, and then I love it more.

Amazingly dark, just ambivalent enough to almost doubt along with Rodney, and that breathtaker of an ending. Great story.

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almostnever June 18 2008, 20:14:46 UTC

Oh, it gets so much worse (in an awesome kind of way).

busaikko August 19 2008, 08:06:45 UTC

Thank you!

kassrachel June 18 2008, 18:25:34 UTC

Oh, man, wow.

This is heartbreaking.

busaikko August 19 2008, 08:07:08 UTC

Sorry! Thanks for reading!

aurora_84 June 18 2008, 19:45:01 UTC

Oh man. I enjoyed this story a lot and the ending was just a KILLER.

busaikko August 19 2008, 08:07:26 UTC

Sorry! Thanks for reading!

the_cephalopod June 18 2008, 20:33:27 UTC

Oh my heart! That ending was just so painful... Beautifully done. cep xxx

busaikko August 19 2008, 08:07:34 UTC

Sorry! Thanks for reading!

likeaglass June 18 2008, 21:10:45 UTC

Holy CRAP. I can't even...I don't even know what to say. This is just so delightfully creepy and the little bit of doubt left at the end...*shivers happily*

busaikko August 19 2008, 08:07:48 UTC

Hee! Thanks for reading!