TEAM ANGST: Strategy, "In a Dark Wood"

[trobadora]

Title: In a Dark Wood
Author: aesc ( interview)
Team: Angst
Prompt: Strategy
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: hard R
Warnings: violence, sex
Summary: A five-day hunt.

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Comments

[terribilita]

Oh wow! This is just great, every detail amazingly vivid. I love what their hesitation not-so-subtly implies and I'm amused by John trying to deny what's being implied. Oh, John. Great story.

[liresius]

Whoo! Great story - very fast paced and I like how you structured it to up the suspense.

Loved how absolutely ragged Rodney was and how very feral John was.

Well done, because while it was so dark, you threw in the lifeline of them hesitating - that something that stayed their hands. It calmed the rapid beating of my heart *g*

[helsmeta]

Very, very interesting!

[anonymous]

Ooh the first part was so scary, and the second part was so angsty. This is wonderful and I love them both to death in the last scene.

[argosy]

*points up* That was me. Sigh.

[raincitygirl]

Wow. Just pretty mcuh stuck on wow here.