TEAM SPACE: bury the hatchet, "Bury the Hatchet"

[trobadora]

Title: Bury the Hatchet
Author: bunbunevil
Team: Space
Prompt: bury the hatchet
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG because I'm paranoid
Word count: 2,200
Warnings: None
Summary: There's a time for diplomacy, or that's what John hears.
Author's Notes: To the awesomest beta who ever did beta.

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Comments

[lilacs_lace]

I really like your writing style. Both John's and Rodney's internal thoughts about the situation were hilarious and so them. I like how John loved Woosley one minute and cursed him the next.

[bunbunevil]

It's a side effect of the disconnect between Sheppard and Woosley.

And thanks!

[busaikko]

Lots of great quotable lines in this, like Teyla beating the guard and then Ronon stunning him a lot, which made the story a fun trip through John's head, where he may not be able to stop a smile, but at least he can make it look like a smirk :>

[bunbunevil]

Very true.

[patk]

I love the spot on description of our heroes that - in it's wording - is sometimes almost on the verge of caricature. Funny, felicitous, spot on - enjoyed that immensely

[bunbunevil]

*blinkblink* *swoon*

Thank you! I had hoped that people would find this realistic.

[that_which]

Atta girl.

[bunbunevil]

Thanks, mommy. <3

[trillingstar]

I enjoyed the back-and-forth between Rodney and the Genii "troglodyte," and John's great relief at finding Rodney whole and mostly unharmed. The bracelet made a first-rate gift, too.

[bunbunevil]

Well, I thought so. Thanks! :)