TEAM PLAY: blind alley, "I, Spy"

[fluffyllama]

Title: I, Spy
Author: keiramarcos
Team: Play
Prompt: blind alley
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Explicit sex and foul language
Notes: Beta thanks to Chris King, Ladyholder and Djaddict.
Summary: Wanting John was second nature to me but until recently I’d thought I’d buried the sex thing under a pile of friendship and shared traumatic

Comments

[winter_elf]

Super hot - and I love the snarky Rodney commentary. And yea, John spread out naked on a bed ... *guh*

It should go without saying that when a man three times your size asks you such a question that there is only one answer. “Top.” LOL!!!!!

[djaddict]

Steamingly hot! I think your Rodney voice was spot on!

Well written!

[issaro]

This is probably the best -- truest feeling -- first person POV fic I've ever read. And then there's the sex. Very well done.

[wojelah]

Really interesting take on the prompt - I liked the POV a lot. It gives the fic a sort of noirish feel that works really well with the fic. Thanks!

[admiralandrea]

Oh *hello*! That just hit all my kinks about John in a very good way! Very, very hot stuff.

The best bit, though? Definitely the throw away line about O'Neill recommending the club to John! Conjures up all sorts of lovely ideas about how they came to have that conversation *eg*