Comments | mckay_sheppard: New Fic! Scientific Methods (mcshep, mpreg)

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New Fic! Scientific Methods (mcshep, mpreg)

Aug 18, 2010 15:23

Title: Scientific Methods
Author: Tzzzz
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: John/Rodney
Warnings: mpreg
Genre: AU
Word Count: 27,500
Author's Notes: This is my long overdue fic written for lies_d who requested an mpreg fic where Atlantis has been cut off from Earth and John and Rodney use an ancient device to procreate, focused more on trying to get pregnant, also ( Read more... )

genre: angst, rating: nc-17, genre: first time, author: tzzzz, genre: drama, genre: mpreg, genre: au - alternate universe

Comments 8

galaxy_song August 19 2010, 21:46:25 UTC

Wounderful fic, always love a happy ending :)

tzzzz August 20 2010, 08:46:38 UTC

Thank you!

xylohypha August 20 2010, 04:31:06 UTC

Awww.

Kind of fun to read a story where the Ancient mpreg apparatus doesn't necessarily work right the very first time.

tzzzz August 20 2010, 08:46:19 UTC

Thank you!

I don't like it! water333 May 7 2011, 12:13:39 UTC

I've just read a bit of it and already I don't like it!! I love Mpreg but how you're writing this story is just so wrong..I mean, you have elizabeth almost as 'RULER' and what she says go, kinda mind-set and kinda bi*tchy and hitler..SHE seem HAPPY that she gets to RULE it all and not being able to contact EARTH is a GOOD thing for her and teyle..God, never like her much either and how you're portraying is not likable at all..I mean, she's just out for her own ppls gain and yes, I know that's what she's suppose to do but god, what little I read was so annoying that I had to quit! You ruined Mpreg for me. In this story anyways.. I liked that Carson is there but that's about it..The men/Shepard/Rodney seems weak and pathetic..I don't know what you were trying to achieve the story but if it was so PROMOTE females B*TCH'S/WH*RE's and RULE all, you got it!!

Re: I don't like it! tzzzz May 7 2011, 19:27:15 UTC

I'm sorry to hear that you don't like this fic. However, I am confused as to why you feel the need to expound on your dislike so thoroughly and with such awful spelling and grammar, especially when you haven't even bothered to finish reading the story. You do realize that by not finishing the story and by demonstrating that you yourself do not put in the effort to respond in real English rather than netspeak, you harm any credibility you might have to pass this off as concrit. An author won't be willing to accept that she is writing a story "wrong" (if writing a story wrong is even possible) from someone who uses Hitler as an adjective (and clearly is not competent to write a story his or herself). Instead, you come off as an empty-headed bully who hides behind a thin veil of supposedly speaking his or her mind, but who clearly has no idea how to speak to people in a way that will achieve desired results ( ... )

Re: I don't like it! water333 May 8 2011, 06:44:46 UTC

Well, after I posted to you, I noticed my mistakes but there wasn't anyway for me to 'CORRECT' them, so, whatever ( ... )

wanted_a_pony November 14 2011, 21:39:24 UTC

Mmmmm, I don't know how I missed this but it means I got an angsty smooshy treat to savor this Monday. I continue to be fascinated by your takes on mpreg & its complications & complexities. (As tho' making John & Rodney deal with their own issues & emotional baggage-trains wasn't enough.... ;-)

Thanks to lies_d for sponsoring this, & to you for your generousity in writing & sharing it!