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Residual - Part 2

Jan 25, 2009 16:37

Title: Residual - Part 2
Author: ArtemisPrime
Rating: R (for language)
Summary: Jeannie tapped her fingers on her crossed arms, wishing frantically that the line would move faster, that today wasn’t train the new cashier day and, for the unknownth time, that her brother was still on Atlantis.
Characters: John, Jeannie, Elizabeth, Teyla, new scientists ( Read more... )

author: artemisprime, rating: r

Comments 10

psyko_kittie January 25 2009, 23:21:35 UTC

*sniffle* Touching chapter. I would love to see more of this soon.

artemis_prime January 28 2009, 01:01:15 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it.

captain_tibbs January 26 2009, 16:15:34 UTC

Stop making me cry!
I don't really mean that. This is a beautifully heartbreaking fic, and if you have any more of it in you, I'd love to read it.
But even though it's so short, and a lot of things remain unsaid, it's still very good.

artemis_prime January 28 2009, 01:01:34 UTC

Sorry for the tears. Thanks for commenting.

rohaa January 26 2009, 16:36:00 UTC

sequel yes? :D

artemis_prime January 28 2009, 01:01:55 UTC

Umm... perhaps?

rude02 January 26 2009, 17:56:22 UTC

dude... just that.
oh and.... MORE!!!

artemis_prime January 28 2009, 01:03:21 UTC

Glad you liked it.

inalaska2004 January 27 2009, 05:12:31 UTC

not what i was expecting!! good job. i am a sucker for happy endings and would love it if you continued in the story and gave me hope. i not only cant picture rodney like he might be, but i cant bear sheppard as he is! much to painful... please make it stop!
and the drinking seemed very real, very true to character. its something you can do alone and i can see sheppard only dealing with his pain alone, not sharing and such. definitely not a talker.

artemis_prime January 28 2009, 01:02:50 UTC

I've always wondered what would break Sheppard. This was my answer. Thanks for commenting.