Oh! This is really lovely - so quiet and thoughtful. The cartography metaphor is beautiful: a mapping not only of physical cuts and scars, but also of the progression of their relationship. Kudos!
I can't believe you came up with that half way through your journey home. Not on the whole journey home, but half.
It is a very tender piece and unlike anything I have read of yours to date. And I mean that in a good way. And not in a way that makes your other work sound bad. It is just different. It is almost from a new perspective, a new voice even though there are no words spoken, and now I am just sounding weird.
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I can't believe you came up with that half way through your journey home. Not on the whole journey home, but half.
It is a very tender piece and unlike anything I have read of yours to date. And I mean that in a good way. And not in a way that makes your other work sound bad. It is just different. It is almost from a new perspective, a new voice even though there are no words spoken, and now I am just sounding weird.
I really liked it.
Thank you.
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