You Are Here by Spacedmonkey (PG)

[spacedmonkey]

Title: You Are Here

Comments

[tarlanx]

Love the sad transition from competition to feeling each other's pain so keenly.

[spacedmonkey]

Thank you. Just came to me as I was walking home. Love your icon.

[endcredits]

Oh! This is really lovely - so quiet and thoughtful. The cartography metaphor is beautiful: a mapping not only of physical cuts and scars, but also of the progression of their relationship. Kudos!

[spacedmonkey]

Many thanks.

[buddhawitch]

Been ordered to comment. Like I needed it.

I can't believe you came up with that half way through your journey home. Not on the whole journey home, but half.

It is a very tender piece and unlike anything I have read of yours to date. And I mean that in a good way. And not in a way that makes your other work sound bad. It is just different. It is almost from a new perspective, a new voice even though there are no words spoken, and now I am just sounding weird.

I really liked it.

Thank you.

[spacedmonkey]

You're more than welcome. Was actually only from about 2 miles from home. :)

[mezzo_cammin]

Oh, wow...that was a nice piece of writing. Masterful, even. There's not bit of it that is superfluous or unnecessary. Beautiful!

[spacedmonkey]

Thank you very much.

[mellyna]

Beautiful piece. Thanks for sharing.

[spacedmonkey]

Thank you for reading.