Title: Residual
Author: ArtemisPrime
Rating: PG (for language)
Characters: John, Jeannie, mention of Rodney
Spoilers: none
Angst: yes
Summary: "The forty minute drive was the third longest of John Sheppard’s life; only his mother’s funeral procession and his father’s bailing him out of jail at seventeen were longer."
A/N: My first entry for this
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If this is a death fic, could you please put a warning for it somewhere. Thank you.
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Sorry about the lack of warning. Since Rodney isn't dead, I didn't think to include a warning. Will remember for next time. Thanks.
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I was also worried that this was going to be an unmarked death fic, but you handled it quite nicely. =) I'm not sure if I'm being clueless (quite possible!) or if things were left ambiguous on purpose, but it kind of adds weight to the whole thing, not knowing exactly what happened to Rodney.
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Anyway, really cool. i enjoyed! :D Brought a tear to my eye! Well done
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(not that I mind, but some people might want you to put a warning for angst, just so they know they're not going to read a happy fic. Again, I think that's evident by the tone and, again, I actually enjoyed it very much. I may be wrong, but I don't think it's a death!fic, why Melanie's warnings and talk of first time? It's a hospital, or sanitarium, or something, right? Which makes John's reactions perfectly reasonable. Good job.)
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