FIC: All the Empty Spaces by Spacebabe (NC-17)

[spacebabe]

Title: All the Empty Spaces
Author: Spacebabe
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Kink, d/s, darkish
Word count: ~ 3,700
A/N: Thank you so much to Lamardeuse for stepping up and taking a look at this for me. Also, thanks to Henrycat for letting me run a few last minute things by her. As always, if you spot any typos, please let me know so I can fix them.

Comments

[ceitie]

Wow. Seriously. Not only is this freaking hot, it's great storytelling. All the tension that's just hanging between them and I got drawn into Rodney's game just as much as John was, not wanting to go there but needing to know too much to stop. Very cool.

[spacebabe]

*big grin* Thanks, sweetie! Some people might call this vanilla, but sheesh, it's sure the kinkiest I've ever written :D Muchas gracias for taking the time to comment!

[adafrog]

Wow. Beautifully done! Thanks.

[spacebabe]

Thanks! :)

[lillian13]

Oh my.

Oh. MY.

What a thing to read on one computer as I'm getting the new one ready. I think you broke me.

(Adds to memories.)

[spacebabe]

*grins* Thanks! Glad I could give you something to read while setting up the new compy. Watching software install is soooo boring.

[shadowserenity]

I'd say that I'm not usually into kink, but you wouldn't know that by how much of it I read. Hey, in the end it's all McShep goodness! ;)

This was great :). I enjoyed the tension between John and Rodney - the breaking point, where they could harm one another with words, not just actions. I also loved how you described the white space in John's head and his desire to give up control, but not experience pain.

Btw, I've friended you :). Hope you don't mind.

[spacebabe]

Hey there! Friend away, by all means :) And thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I do enjoy writing tension between them, but wow, yeah, the tension has never taken this form before. Thanks again, and I'm glad you liked it.

[melagan]

Oh my! The tension and the heat and then the tenderness...*whimper*

[spacebabe]

Thanks! They are so wonderfully messed up, our boys :) I'm thrilled you liked it.