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Fanfic: A Place For Wendy - Chapter 7
Apr 18, 2013 19:25
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challenge 02: the other sharon
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akachankami
April 19 2013, 00:05:46 UTC
oh noooooo! LOL sorry, my reaction at the last scene =P almost there! damn! XD
but this was great improvement! *-*
poor exhausted sharon ♥ wendy is getting all the love XD
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urania16
April 24 2013, 11:30:31 UTC
You're really good at describing Sharon's exhaustion. What the crying of the baby does to her, the frustration it causes.
And we're getting more Andy, yeah for that!
He's so thoughtful with the milk and the coffee.:)
"She was not wearing her glasses and he could see them better without barriers.
Loved that line.
And then almost there, but Wendy cries :(
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but this was great improvement! *-*
poor exhausted sharon ♥ wendy is getting all the love XD
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And we're getting more Andy, yeah for that!
He's so thoughtful with the milk and the coffee.:)
"She was not wearing her glasses and he could see them better without barriers.
Loved that line.
And then almost there, but Wendy cries :(
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