XD this is pretty cute^^;;; (but you might wanna let someone read it over before you post @_@ I had to stop reading in a few places to work out what you meant...) for example: Hi,” he answered back not moving from in front of Cheol Yong or taking his eyes off the younger boy. “I’m so happy you one.” “The boys and I are, too.”
Should be "won"? :)
Anyways its cute XD I love how Mir is sooo grumpy hehe~ can't wait to see more ^_^ ♥
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please update fast! :D
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I like the beginning of your story.
Keep it up!
Update whenever you can. =)
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Hi,” he answered back not moving from in front of Cheol Yong or taking his eyes off the younger boy.
“I’m so happy you one.”
“The boys and I are, too.”
Should be "won"? :)
Anyways its cute XD I love how Mir is sooo grumpy hehe~ can't wait to see more ^_^ ♥
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Please update soon!
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