Damaged 20 + other tidbits

Oct 30, 2006 12:13

Four quick pointers/nonsense:
1. My computer is back, and so is my muse. YEAH, BABY! *cough* Ahem. Right >.>
2. Have figured out how to use messenger today. *yay* No longer feel like a technological hick. A bit laconic, though.
3. Have signed up for the Vampentine Challenge on hpvamp. Vampires are a long-standing kink. Wasn't even a member until now, lol ( Read more... )

randomness, damaged- h/d, hp, rl

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olliegami October 30 2006, 13:56:05 UTC
POOR DRACO! -whine-

This was fantastic though, it's a shame SUCH A SHAME that Harry is unsure of himself. WHY OH WHY DOES THE WORLD HAVE TO BE SO CRUEL. -sob-

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mayushi October 30 2006, 16:09:57 UTC
*is amused* Draco is being very angsty, indeed. *g* Don't you just love how he makes up Harry's mind for him? I do! He's trying his best, though. So glad you liked it:p

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novembermond October 30 2006, 18:12:46 UTC
not sure if I ever commented before, but I read the whole thing and I love it. Your characterizations of Harry and Draco are too great.

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mayushi October 30 2006, 19:57:34 UTC
Wah! Thank you!

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irrelevant October 30 2006, 19:43:40 UTC
It doesn't seem to me that your Harry's as unsure of himself as your Draco seems to think. Draco was going on about Harry needing to believe in himself and his decisions so that the healing process could proceed apace. Harry might see this incident as Draco withdrawing both support and belief in him. Not a good thing. It would have made more sense if he'd said his piece, then - instead of telling Harry he was basically cutting him off physically - let Harry to sleep on it and abide by Harry's decision on the matter, whatever it might be.

I liked the chapter, but it did seem a bit contradictory.

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mayushi October 31 2006, 05:56:19 UTC
I'm glad you liked it:) As for the rest - under normal circumstances, you'd be right. But letting Harry make the decision would have been impossible - Draco doesn't trust Harry's judgement. He's not withdrawing his support at all - just their sexual relationship, which is understandable under the circumstances:)

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irrelevant November 2 2006, 10:18:22 UTC
It is, certainly. Just hoping it doesn't set poor Harry back further than he already seems to be. *sniffle* I think it's great that they're not jumping in the sack right off the bat. It's a refreshing change, these days. :)

I must say I agree with the rest of your readers about Jenny. She is rather annoying. But then, I'm not precisely fond of her.

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irrelevant November 2 2006, 10:20:35 UTC
Ginny not Jenny. *headdesk* You can tell it's bloody two in the morning here, can't you? :)

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noroi_inu October 30 2006, 21:04:43 UTC
loved it! but poor Draco!!! having to resist sexy Harry like that. ;-;

if only voldemort wasn't such a bastard and hadn't tortured confident Harry into such an...un...confident one. >>;;

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mayushi October 31 2006, 06:13:15 UTC
Thank you:)

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spae October 30 2006, 21:55:39 UTC
oh bah ... no sex and more angst ... you made my face do this ---> :(

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mayushi October 31 2006, 06:16:27 UTC
lol! I meant for the story to have more sex when I started it, too. It got away from me, as stories sometimes do:)

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spae October 31 2006, 07:22:03 UTC
awww ... I'm just being mean. I like that it's not easy to just jump into bed and screw without considering the consequences ... but you write the hotboysex so well ... ;)

And yes ... I know how plot - damnable plot - can interfere with good ol' smutwriting! Tis the scourge of the fanfic world!

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mayushi October 31 2006, 17:31:48 UTC
but you write the hotboysex so well ... ;)

*SQUEE* Right. Ahem. *blushes* Thank you!

But the smut can be twice as interesting with plot intertwined:)

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