Comments | mayushi: Damaged update!

mayushi

Damaged update!

Jun 26, 2006 02:36

W00t:) It's about time, isn't it?

( Chapter 12 )

slash, damaged- h/d, hp, fanfiction

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mayushi June 26 2006, 08:32:45 UTC

Yeah, it was a bit unsettling, wasn't it?

taanis June 26 2006, 02:17:31 UTC

One of the best, if not the best chapter. I'm leaning towards "intense" for lack of a better word. Stuff happens, more Draco comforting Harry- it was all very, very good.
I'm really proud of Neville. But I can't help wondering why Lupin didn't let her bleed to death. I mean, it's just Bellatrix Lestrange.
But then again, that's me...

mayushi June 26 2006, 08:34:29 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked:)
As for Lupin- well, maybe he didn't want Neville to become a killer. Maybe he had other reasons. I'm not telling XD

witherwings7 June 26 2006, 02:30:42 UTC

Yes! Wonderful chapter, as always :D

mayushi June 26 2006, 08:34:55 UTC

Thank you!

I love your icon, btw:)

witherwings7 June 26 2006, 08:42:05 UTC

Thanks! I love her work, she's one of my favorite fanartists. I am so tempted to get a comission.

mayushi June 26 2006, 08:45:31 UTC

Oh, rightly so. It's very pretty.

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alliekatgal June 26 2006, 03:09:27 UTC

Neville was rather scary here. I think even Draco was shocked by just how quickly Neville exacted retribution. I loved how sweet Draco was with Harry. Very nice!

mayushi June 26 2006, 08:37:58 UTC

Thank you. And, as for Neville- well, he had good reason to be scary, facing the woman who drove his parents so bonkers they're nearly catatonic by torturing them with an Unforgivable. I think I'd be pretty murderous, too.

sugareey June 26 2006, 03:35:58 UTC

I definitely didn't expect Neville to do that at all. I feel like Draco's is kind of in a lingo now...and it's as if everyone around him has changed, except for him. Very dark, this installment is. Wow.

mayushi June 26 2006, 08:39:52 UTC

Glad you liked:) I guess everyone around him did change, and it's probably upsetting because even though he didn't fully know them before, he had some preconceived notions of them that no longer apply. It's a war, after all- it changes people.