Comments | mayotteruhoshi: Bits and Pieces

mayotteruhoshi

Bits and Pieces

Apr 11, 2007 21:52

ONE MORE DAY UNTIL WASHINGTON!!!

Once again, I should be reading Heart of Darkness, but I'm not.....

I'm also actually posting a poem/poetic ramblings because April is National Poetry month...I'm also gonna post my favorite poem at the bottom....

Well, going through my flash drive trying to find something to turn in poetry wise for creative writing ( Read more... )

poetry, writing

Comments 7

not just hand it in ... kkloekat April 12 2007, 09:59:41 UTC

you're supposed yo read it! out loud! with EMOTION!! YAY!! i know you could do it, and the third thing you posted would be really good, too! damn! stop being so good at this XD

Re: not just hand it in ... mayotteruhoshi April 13 2007, 02:22:05 UTC

Hahah...thanks.....

But seriously, I'm not AMAZING....there are much better writers than me...

And technically I can't write poetry for shit,,,,,

Like actually using the poetic language and shit....aka, what Kuby was talking about today...

Re: not just hand it in ... kkloekat April 13 2007, 02:29:56 UTC

OBVIOUSLY you can write poetry. look at what you have right there! you're knocking your own talent down, and that's why you're holding all that talent back. just let it go, man! be free!!! like a hippy!

Re: not just hand it in ... mayotteruhoshi April 13 2007, 02:46:33 UTC

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I didn't think that was poetry,,,,,cept for that one thing....

jlc110689 April 13 2007, 02:22:33 UTC

omg everything is good good good!!! and you musttt read the drug one at the poetry slam omg it seriously is perfect for it!! you def. could and should do it! and i love the 3rd thing too the water slipping through your hands defines that PERFECTLY, i get that feeling all the time but ithink thats cuz i have short term memory loss or something haha

mayotteruhoshi April 13 2007, 03:06:08 UTC

Meh, I can't speak out loud....I'd be afriad of doing that....

And sometimes I think you do have short term memory loss.....

DORY!!!

Wow, I haven't seen that movie in SOOOOO LONG!

anonymous July 3 2007, 00:56:50 UTC

i really like teh last bit of the stream of thought, cracking in your mind, thats good.

and about the cherry blossoms, go you, horray for being different and having dreams bigger than what other people say you can or should do.

however "A friendless childhood is mine" < i was a friend to your american girl doll loveing self