Corner of Your Eye (14/14)

[maychorian]

Fandom: Supernatural/Stargate SG-1
Title: Corner of Your Eye
Author: Maychorian
Characters: Jack O'Neill, Dean Winchester
Category: Action/Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Gen, Crossover, Angst
Rating: T/PG-13
Spoilers: Pilot for SPN, up to Season 9 for SG-1
Summary: Jack O'Neill is not very good at being retired. Dean Winchester is not very good

Comments

[maychorian]

Heh, Sam will be surprised and a little impressed, I think. That will be fun to write.

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked that paragraph. It gave me warm fuzzies.

[plratty]

A thoroughly satisfying prologue.
Hands over a wonderful bouquet, as a reward for genius.

More please

[maychorian]

Thank you! ::sniffs the pretty flowers:: More soon. :)

[enouva]

I feel warm and fuzzy, even though the story has ended. Must be the GREAT writing:)
Really liked how they rubbed off on each other and still were themselves.
Can't wait for more stories!

[maychorian]

Really liked how they rubbed off on each other and still were themselves.

Thanks! It's fun to write them picking up on each other's vocabulary. :D

[lita_of_jupiter]

So cute...
and Dean semi-asleep cuddling with his security blankets!

Daniel being concerned at the beginning was great, as was the part about Jack and Dean no longer being strangers... and dude Jack used frigging!

and the ending was love love lovee!!!

I will wait for further adventures of the lovable rogues... and please include one with Jack's reaction to his friend being hunted by the FBI and dead in StLouis

[maychorian]

and Dean semi-asleep cuddling with his security blankets!

I loved that scene... Dean snuggling with a bottle of Advil and knife.

and please include one with Jack's reaction to his friend being hunted by the FBI and dead in StLouis

Oh, that's an awesome idea! Thanks so much!

Thanks for reading and commenting through this whole story! I really appreciate you. :D

[lita_of_jupiter]

And i really appreciate your writing!!!

I will be waiting for the next story!

[lita_of_jupiter]

also I totally ♥ your icon

[julorean]

EEEEEEE, SO GREAT! :D Fantastic ending. I love Jack luring him out with steak, that bound to get him going. Would work well for me, for that matter. XP Their interacton is just so fantastic! They're quite alike in some ways, and complementary in others.

[maychorian]

I love Jack luring him out with steak, that bound to get him going.

I love that part. It's just like Jack's "tuna sandwich torture" in that one episode. :D

They're quite alike in some ways, and complementary in others.

Exactly! Oh, I love them. <3 <3 <3