Birthday Meme!

[maychorian]

I said I would, and now I am. It's my birthday and I'm having a commentfic meme just for me! roque-clasique started it and it was fun then so hopefully it'll be fun now. Only a few notes

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Raised From the Depths, 1/2

[authoressnebula]

Happy birthday love! May tackle a few more of these: you've got some fun prompts in here

Raised From the Depths, 2/2

[authoressnebula]

He inhaled and immediately remembered that his grace would not keep him safe from the physical boundaries of Earth. Water slid into his nose and throat, and he tried to cough it back up, but only succeeded in pulling more water in. He couldn't breathe. The water around him was no longer calm, as it had appeared when they'd first arrived at the docks. It was a prison and it was-

It was killing him. Castiel was dying, and the pain, the terror, that accompanied that thought was enough to make him begin to kick and flail. "Father," he called desperately, but the sound traveled barely to his own ears, and more water was pulled in. He was sinking still, and the blackness surrounding him was swallowing him now. Desperately, with the last of his strength, he raised his hands towards where he'd fallen from

Re: Raised From the Depths, 2/2

[maychorian]

Oh, hon, this is wonderful. ♥ ♥ ♥ I love it! Poor Cas, and he's lucky to have such good friends. Awesome last line, too.

Thank you so much! :D

Re: Raised From the Depths, 2/2

[elsewhere_kels]

Just beautiful (well, in an awful sort of way). Your descriptions were so vivid and I love the turnabout in Dean and Castiel's roles.

Re: Raised From the Depths, 2/2

[dotfic]

I liked what you did with his pov here, his confusion at what's happening to him. Oh, poor Cas. Of course Dean's going to pull you out of the water.