POETIC JUSTICE; Sam, Dean, Castiel; PG for language; Warning: Poetry.chibifriezaApril 6 2010, 18:35:30 UTC
[Note: I had to modify the double dactyl because I didn't really have enough double-dactylic names to work with, so I just dispensed with the second-line subject/name requirement for most of them. There is still one true double dactyl in there, though, so I didn't entirely cop out. ^_
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POETIC JUSTICE [17/18]; Sam, Dean, Castiel; PG for language; Warning: Poetry.chibifriezaApril 6 2010, 19:18:15 UTC
There was a smell and a sizzle of bacon frying and the beautiful aroma of coffee when Sam woke up, early sunlight filtering in through the sheer front curtains. He sat up slowly, unfolding himself with care and precision, and finding out exactly how his sleeping accomodation had affected his spine. Glancing over toward the other couch, he discovered that his brother was absent. Then he heard a low feminine laugh from the direction of the kitchen, and sighed, shaking his head. He got up off the couch, popped his back in as many ways as he possibly could, and headed for the kitchen
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Re: POETIC JUSTICE [18/18]; Sam, Dean, Castiel; PG for language; Warning: Poetry.zekkassApril 8 2010, 13:17:29 UTC
This is the most impressive story I think I've ever written, 'cause you did it in character, complete with proper poetry forms, and with a plot to boot!
Also, Castiel being impressive while talking in the voice of my favorite poet ever? Pure win.
Re: POETIC JUSTICE [18/18]; Sam, Dean, Castiel; PG for language; Warning: Poetry.chibifriezaApril 8 2010, 15:41:09 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I KNOW RIGHT. I read the prompt and went CASTIEL IS GOING TO BE BADASS ON E. E. CUMMINGS DAY. THAT'S JUST THE WAY IT IS. Well, I think maybe that didn't happen until I had the beginning of my plot, which fdkjhfgjkdlh didn't happen AT ALL until, like, halfway through Day 1, but. I'm so glad it hit you right. I wasn't sure I had the voice anymore by that point, so I'm taking your compliment as an indicator that I didn't slip too far, at least. :D
Re: POETIC JUSTICE [18/18]; Sam, Dean, Castiel; PG for language; Warning: Poetry.chibifriezaApril 8 2010, 17:21:06 UTC
I don't mind in the least! I hope you don't mind if I don't friend you back, though; I don't make very many locked posts, and when I do, it's because they're fairly private. I am flattered by your attention, however. :D
Re: POETIC JUSTICE [18/18]; Sam, Dean, Castiel; PG for language; Warning: Poetry.chibifriezaApril 9 2010, 06:00:15 UTC
THANK YOU. :D My favourites were the last two (though I feel compelled to admit, I kind of think the one where Dean explains their family history might actually be too literal for surrealism *_* but that's Winchesters for you), but dactyl day was also fun. The acrostics... well, I like to read them over, but I tell you what, they were kind of exhausting. XD
Re: POETIC JUSTICE [18/18]; Sam, Dean, Castiel; PG for language; Warning: Poetry.jaune_chatAugust 28 2010, 21:41:36 UTC
AHAHAHAHA! That was magnificent! Delightfully in-character, a great case, and damn does poetry sound awesome on Castiel when he's chastising the evildoers. Wonderful job!
Re: POETIC JUSTICE [18/18]; Sam, Dean, Castiel; PG for language; Warning: Poetry.ziarenete13xJanuary 9 2011, 08:16:14 UTC
*stumbled on this waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay late*
I love this with the love of many burning things, yet for all the wonderful (incandescently - acutely - characterised) poetry this bit of prose at the end is what struck me most: "They checked out and hit the road. As Dean eased onto the highway, he glanced over at Sam and grinned. Castiel was in the back seat; the windows were down; the sky was blue, and they’d just saved somebody’s life again."
Also, I would pay to see this as an episode, it plays out better than some of the actual ones even.
Re: POETIC JUSTICE [18/18]; Sam, Dean, Castiel; PG for language; Warning: Poetry.chibifriezaJanuary 10 2011, 17:37:20 UTC
*blinks*
Wow, thank you. What an extravagently lovely comment. :D (I intend to podfic this at some point... though I'm not sure when that point will be. So, uh, stay tuned? :P If you want.)
Your compliments make me beam. Seriously, thanks. :D
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(thank you! I am very glad to hear it.)
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Also, Castiel being impressive while talking in the voice of my favorite poet ever? Pure win.
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I KNOW RIGHT. I read the prompt and went CASTIEL IS GOING TO BE BADASS ON E. E. CUMMINGS DAY. THAT'S JUST THE WAY IT IS. Well, I think maybe that didn't happen until I had the beginning of my plot, which fdkjhfgjkdlh didn't happen AT ALL until, like, halfway through Day 1, but. I'm so glad it hit you right. I wasn't sure I had the voice anymore by that point, so I'm taking your compliment as an indicator that I didn't slip too far, at least. :D
Thanks so much for your comment!
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I AM SO GLAD THAT YOU ARE PLEASED. <3
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I love this with the love of many burning things, yet for all the wonderful (incandescently - acutely - characterised) poetry this bit of prose at the end is what struck me most: "They checked out and hit the road. As Dean eased onto the highway, he glanced over at Sam and grinned. Castiel was in the back seat; the windows were down; the sky was blue, and they’d just saved somebody’s life again."
Also, I would pay to see this as an episode, it plays out better than some of the actual ones even.
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Wow, thank you. What an extravagently lovely comment. :D (I intend to podfic this at some point... though I'm not sure when that point will be. So, uh, stay tuned? :P If you want.)
Your compliments make me beam. Seriously, thanks. :D
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