Every Word That Comes Forth (Castiel/Dean, PG)lexhibitionApril 1 2010, 03:57:01 UTC
This wilderness was once home to demons, before they became used to the comfort of human living. Long ago the scalded this land, ripped stone from the womb of the earth and scattered it across the arid sands, scorched the sands barren and stoked fires which still burn hot.
Castiel came here because he hadn't thought a place could be so empty. But the silence is real, stifling until interrupted by the buzz of his phone.
Human technology is fallible in these conditions: the screen of his phone is hard to read in the light, the keys are clogged with grit. Castiel's fingers fumble to read the message Dean has sent to him.
hey cas we got pizza n beer u shd drop by
Somewhere far away Dean and his brother are recovering from a hunt by indulging their gluttony. Their presence in this place is anachronistic.
Re: Every Word That Comes Forth (Castiel/Dean, PG)vikkiApril 1 2010, 04:20:20 UTC
I like this story! With Dean as the tempter and Castiel struggling against him: it's very different. I like fics that deal with Castiel's search for God, and this one has some very nice, Biblical imagery.
Because him alone you shall serve. Yes. This is beautiful.
Re: Every Word That Comes Forth (Castiel/Dean, PG)mulder200April 1 2010, 21:17:00 UTC
Wow! I really love how you chow Cas's struggle for his desires to be with Dean and his devotion to his Father. Poor guy. If only he knew how to have both and not angst over it.
Re: Every Word That Comes Forth (Castiel/Dean, PG)bientotOctober 16 2010, 07:48:29 UTC
The Lord works in mysterious ways...as does The Tempter. It's really rare to see fanfic make legitimate reference to Biblical sources, and you've done so very very well.
Castiel came here because he hadn't thought a place could be so empty. But the silence is real, stifling until interrupted by the buzz of his phone.
Human technology is fallible in these conditions: the screen of his phone is hard to read in the light, the keys are clogged with grit. Castiel's fingers fumble to read the message Dean has sent to him.
hey cas we got pizza n beer u shd drop by
Somewhere far away Dean and his brother are recovering from a hunt by indulging their gluttony. Their presence in this place is anachronistic.
Busy Castiel types back ( ... )
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Because him alone you shall serve.
Yes. This is beautiful.
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