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maychorian

The Mouths of Children (7/?)

Apr 06, 2009 23:54

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: The Mouths of Children
Author: Maychorian
Characters: Dean, Castiel, Sam, Ruby
Category: Gen, Humor, Crack (and now Angst and H/C too, looks like)
Rating: PG13/T (language)
Spoilers: Through 4.10
Summary: "We still have work for you to do, Dean Winchester," Castiel said solemnly, doing his utmost not to sigh. "This ( Read more... )

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Comments 79

ina_ami April 7 2009, 04:10:41 UTC

Dean is really like a yo-yo...first he's a kid completely and then his a kid with an adult mind...love your story...
"Then Ruby uttered a strangled, choking cry, and Sam turned his head just in time to see her crumble to the floor."...oh you made so curious..hope you update soon because I really want to see what happens next.

maychorian May 16 2009, 16:38:42 UTC

Thank you! Dean the yo-yo is a lot of fun to write. :D

starry_ice April 7 2009, 04:27:22 UTC

Uh oh... What's wrong with Ruby now? I can't believe I'm saying this, but we need her.. so she can fix Dean!

Anyways, loved this part. L'il Dean without memories is so adorable :D

maychorian May 16 2009, 16:39:43 UTC

I find myself constantly shocked by just how inexpressibly CUTE lil Dean manages to be. I just...can't believe it's possible. :D Thanks!

chocochip_pie April 7 2009, 05:11:41 UTC

Yay! More little Dean!

This is great(as always), but I'd like to point out this:

"And then I threw up and cried and Uncle Cas hugged me and I fell asleep," Dean was saying, still reciting the events of the afternoon. "It's too bad you missed the slide, Sammy, but it's okay you weren't there for that part. Cas's hugs are almost as good as Daddy's, and I woulda hated to throw up on you or somethin'."

Your little kid voice here is spot on! It's too adorable for words!

maychorian May 16 2009, 16:40:49 UTC

Hee! Thank you! I love Dean's little kid voice. It's a lot of fun.

ldyghst April 7 2009, 05:18:21 UTC

OH crap...more soon please!

maychorian May 16 2009, 16:41:49 UTC

Thanks! Sorry it took so long. I'm already partway through the next chapter though. ::thumbs up::

tahirire April 7 2009, 05:22:37 UTC

Oooh. Sam demanding to know 'What happened,' to Cas reminds me of John demanding to know what happened when Dean let the shtriga in. very well played.

Uh-oh, it's contagious!!

maychorian May 16 2009, 16:53:11 UTC

Ha, I'm glad that that moment reminded you of John. I can't say that I did that on purpose, but it's definitely in keeping with the way I see Sam as so very much John's son. ♥ Thanks, darlin'.