Forevermore

[mayalioness]

Forevermore
a freeverse poem by Lioness Amaya

There's a world before me
Fragmented like shattered glass
Sweet regrets and bitter dreams
Endless sleep forevermore

There's a sky above me
Endless grey clouds
Acid raindrops and black snowflakes
Hopeless forevermore

There's a child invisible to me
Eyes devoid of all save tears
Headless dolls and vanished

Comments

Angst?

[frocked11]

Is there something going on that I don't know about? Anyways, I love this poem. It's sad and thoughtful.

Good job.

There's a world before me
Fragmented like shattered glass
Sweet regrets and bitter dreams
Endless sleep forevermore

This was my favorite part. :)

Re: Angst?

[mayalioness]

Uh, it depends how much you know about what's been going on...
Anyway, this was written in the middle of a crowd of yelling thirteen-year-olds during math. Don't ask me how it managed to turn out angsty. ^.^ Thanks so much!
Yeah, that was my favourite too. I always love first verses. =D

Re: Angst?

[frocked11]

I suppose I don't know as much since I'm not allowed on FF anymore...

Do you mean during school? You have school? Summer's already half over for me.

:)

Re: Angst?

[mayalioness]

That sucks. Majorly. =[
School ended two days ago for me. ^.^