Yes! Now I can comment publicly about how much I liked this piece. You told a complex story with a very simple and arresting image.
This may sound corny, but there is something very magical about this. I love how it gives the sense of being sparkley (with the stars and the wand and the bindings) and yet does not at all resemble and 8th-grade girl's locker. You know what I mean: glitter galore. Instead, it really gave me the subtle sense of light and movement.
Oh, and the little details like Sirius' ring were really genius.
You're so sweet. I'm so happy you like the way I showed magic, I was a bit worried about that for exactly the reasons you mentioned. This really means a lot to me.
Glad you noticed the rings, I added them at the very end, right before I sent it in. I realized I needed something to show his status.
You used your prompt really well! I love how their lips are barely touching, like Sirius is trying to hold back but he can't, and Remus just waits for it, because he knows it's coming and he's so relieved when it does.
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This may sound corny, but there is something very magical about this. I love how it gives the sense of being sparkley (with the stars and the wand and the bindings) and yet does not at all resemble and 8th-grade girl's locker. You know what I mean: glitter galore. Instead, it really gave me the subtle sense of light and movement.
Oh, and the little details like Sirius' ring were really genius.
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Glad you noticed the rings, I added them at the very end, right before I sent it in. I realized I needed something to show his status.
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