Awaking Emotions

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Title: Awaking Emotions
Pairing: Member-ai!.. & Hikato is the main OTP.
Rating: PG-15 because it's how old I am now. :D
Warnings: OOC JUMP members + Horrible Writing + Attempted FLUFF + Slight Angst?
Notes: I just wanted to try writing a one-shot of Hikato.. for once. D: You can see how much I fail at this.
Words: 2,706
Summary: Keito was kidnapped, and

Comments

[dachnayary]

Kaoru-chan!!!!

This is AWESOME!!! I love Hikaru here especially when he's looking for Keito
*imagines it* *faints*

Awww. Keito was broken hearted at first but I'm glad they raelized it with the help of.... RYUTARO!!!!! *gasp*

It's the opposite of Keeping You WarmXDD
And he even used Shintaro and the Juniors =)
Good work Ryutaro and HikaTo is really good together (^_^)

"I love your father's only son" is just a total win. It made me like AWWWW =)

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O_O Renz-chan, are you okay?! *gets ready a kettle of boiling hot water to wake you up* DO YOU NEED MY HELP IN WAKING UP?!! :D I like Hikaru when he was looking for Keito. It gives him this image that he's determined to find Keito no matter what!

Yup! :D Hahahaha! Ryutaro-cupid to the rescue!

:x I JUST REALISED THAT! XD;; Shintaro helped here, but he was the one who ruined it in Keeping You Warm! :D Yay Ryutaro paid off his non-mean parts.. in a sense. XP

:x I was thinking of what to say about their bond, but then suddenly Hikaru's part in a magazine where they all had to answer 100 questions. Even he choose Keito as his answer if he was to date a JUMP member! I remember him saying that he'd want to confess like, 'I like your brother's sister'. But I thought, does Keito have siblings?! DX So yeah, I had to use that instead. :x

[dachnayary]

Kaoru-chan!!!! Do you want to ruin my face!!!!
I don't need HELP anymore!!!! *wakes up and runs*

Yeah, I love him for that XD

Yeah and Shinatro also made up for his big brother =)

Yeah, I remebered that article and I LOVE that very much!!!! especially Yuto, Yama-chan, Dai-chan and Keito's part.
Keito answered he wanted Yuto to be his boyfriend *flails*

NakaTo? hahaha

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Hmmm.. This is better than I tried to help Jen. *won't say a word about what I did* XD;; D: Nooo! Renz-chan! I was joking! *tosses the kettle away*

:3 I think a lot of people do~

:D Yup! Shintaro would be appearing more. I think. XD;;

:x Yeah! XD Though, I can't exactly imagine Nakato just yet!

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:D No problem! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! (And commenting about it :x)

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XD Hahaha! Yaaay! That's good. :D

:3 Sure thing! I'm actually working on three One-Shots. @_@;; *overloaded*

[jeanzaddict]

adfghjsaokdqhjikjodq...

hikaxkeitooooooo <3<3<3<3
lol at shintaroooooooo hahahahahah.
'i love your father's only son' -> hikaru's very own words to confess <3
is it just me or does ryutaro give out the feeling of a mafia godfather? LOL. he sounds like one when he reveals that he's planned everything. LOLOLOL.

HIKAxKEITO -> my otp
so i totally love you for writing this :).

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:D Was it when Shintaro came back with Ryutaro or the fact he doesnt know what a pager is, which amused you?

XD;; Yay! Someone noticed that it was Hikaru's words too!

o_O WOW, he does, doesn't he? XD;; Must be high when I wrote that part.. The next thing we all know, he takes out a gun and tells Hikaru to kiss Keito. O_O;;

:3 Hikato is my OTP as well.

XD I'm glad you enjoyed it, and also uhhh.. commented on it! :D

[jeanzaddict]

the fact that shintaro dznt know what a pager is and when he gets scared after seeing hikaru and runs off for his life. lololol. i imagined him with teary eyes and realized that shintaro might look like ryutaro in the making of your seed pv. (u know the part where takaki filmed him and asked him some questions and ryutaro almost cried *his eyes were brimming with tears. lol*)

i always remember those words cuz basically they ARE NOT romantic at all.
i dont really like romantic stuffs and i like guys who dont say that they love/like someone directly. well, more less like hikaru's I LIKE YOUR BROTHER'S SISTER *i'd faint if someone said this to me, not literally but well.... :D*
and i like hikaru cuz he's goofy and tsundere :)

LOLOLOL. you should have included that gun-kissing part in your fic. that wud be awesome *grins*

btw, i dont like hikato name at all. to me, it sounds more like HIKAru and KATO shigeaki. and it implies to me that kato shigeaki molests hikaru :O. LOL. imo :D

imma read ur other fics *off to read*

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XD Hahaha! Yeah, I remember that part! Though, in my mind, I had a teary-eyed Shintaro who was pouting, as if he was forced to go there since Ryutaro had his arm over Shintaro's shoulders.

Owwwh. XD Hahaha! I like Hikaru's way of confessing too. And him confessing directly seems a bit odd, and it would sound like he's trying to pick Keito up! But then, I remember reading in a magazine scan with Hikaru's answers to 100 questions. He wrote that he'd confess like that. 'I like your brother's sister.' XD;; So do I! Hahaha!

O_O UGH NO AAAAGGGGHHHHH! *runs around* DX NOOO SHIGE YOU CANT MOLEST HIM! :x Then, I need to change it, I guess. :x

o___O All righty then. *waves*

[wendi753]

hhm...

there were few flaws in the grammar, but, and the organization of thought is off in some parts....

DEMO, the plot is superb! i love it so much!

hikato is love~!

:D

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XD Sorry about that. ~_~;; I can't actually differentiate when to use past tense, or past uhhh participle. @_@;; Or present. DX My English teacher said the same thing. :x Organization of thought? XD;; What's that? *head desk*

XD;; Uhhh thanks! YESH HIKATO IS LUFF! :D Uhhhmm glad you like it. XD;; Not sure if you enjoyed it because of the drama parts + bad grammar. :x I need to get an English tutor. *flails*

[wendi753]

ah, well, i don't get what teachers teach anyway. i teach myself most of the time. :3 [showing off smart ass]
organization of thoughts? anou~, forget about that, you're plot is very very great nobody will notice whatever i'm saying... [not unless they read it 4 times like i did.]

the thrill! i love it. i was like, "uwaah~! keito was kidnapped?! noo~!"

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:x I thought myself from cartoons when I was young PFFT I can't even call myself local since I'm so bad at my mother tongue. D:

XD;; Well, we do have people reading them on a printed paper but that's just my imagination. :) But glad that you pointed out my flaws. :D Well, I noticed? XD;;

And probably people would have gotten the idea who kidnapped him when I described the kidnappers as small people. XD;; *head desk*

[chibilover14]

O__________O;; I NEVER EVER COMMENTED ON YOUR FABULOUS AND AWESOME HIKATO??? HOW COULD I NOT??? *SMACKS SELF*

The scent of the person seemed familiar, and in a second, Keito was able to recgonise who it was, making his heart skip a beat.
AKJLSJLKFLKSJADLF!!! WAAAAAAAAAH!!!!! SO UTTERLY CUUUUTE!!!

He couldn't decided which one was distracting him more; Hikaru watching him do his work, Hikaru hugging him from the back, or the fact that Hikaru was practically breathing in Keito's face.
AKLSDJFOIASJILDFKLAWSEFLIS!!!! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! I LOVE THE FLUFFINESS AND AKLSDJFLKASILFLASKLD *INCOHERENT* XDDD

"I want to spoil him like I'd spoil my little brother if I had one." Keito didn't know why, but hearing that, it made him bumped. "..And what was I exactly expecting?"
AWWWWWWWW... POOR KEITO!!!! T________T

"Do you have a fever?" Inoo placed his hand on Takaki's forehead, but Takaki simply paid attention to Keito who was finally walking out of sight.FOR SOME REASON... FAILED TAKANOO REALLY AMUSES ME AND I REALLY LIKE IT!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDD

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o_o

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You are high, ne~ XD *has no comment*