[FanFic] Take Care of Me

[maxism12]

Title: Take Care Of Me~ (Dongho/Kibum; Protect me)

Pairing: Kibum/Dongho

Rating: G

Genre: Friendship, Bromance

Summary: ; “I need you…” his tear welled eyes screamed. “…I need to you to protect me, for now and forever.”

Comments

[maxism12]

too very short ): But thank you~ ♥

[ext_324746]

CUTE <3
dongho is afraid of regular check up LOL

[maxism12]

8) Thank you~

[s2_otter]

BABY DONGHO IS SO CUTEEEE~
Hahaha, at first it looked like some couple words, and then it became father and son XDDD!

But btw,
the rules of the challenge :
You have to write a minimum of 500 words for each prompt, and, of course, there is no maximum
This uh, looks too short XD Not even 200 I guess?
Develop it some more? It's really cute ^^~!

[maxism12]

this is actually 534 words =/ it was 400-something and I had to add more to it.

Thank you so much for the comment ♥

[s2_otter]

Am I reading something wrong? :S

Dongho quivered as he stretched his arms out to Kibum, begging Kibum to hold him; “I need you…” his tear welled eyes screamed. “…I need to you to protect me, for now and forever.”

This was difficult for the young boy, to hard to take in everything, his lip trembled and he let out a barely there whimper, to which Kibum couldn’t turn his back to. The older boy sighed and pulled Dongho to his chest and patted his head;

“It’s only a regular check up at the Doctor’s Dongho-ah…I’ll buy you chocolates later. Be a good boy, won’t you? “

This is all I see?
(And I pasted this on my microsoft words, the only way I get the number 534 is the characters, which means you have 534 letters of the alphabets in total :S Not 534 words >_<)

[maxism12]

Shucks yeah~ TT_TT IT'S TOOO SHORT!!!!! I AM GOING TO CHANGE IT NOW

THANK YOU SO MUCH ~ /hands you cookies and love ♥

[xanderloves]

I mentally facepalmed at Dongho here. hanging too much around Xander, yes I agree with Kibum!

This was cute :)

[maxism12]

Yes, Dongho should stop hanging around Xander.

Thank you (:

[its_klutzilla]

Right.

So i was going through the tags, and decided to check wat wa under the Kibum/Dongho tag. and then I saw this. I didn't bother looking at the authors name, or anything I just saw the cut and went: WTF?! I have to read???

And so I click slightly confused, look at the usirpic, and think: hey, I've seen that somewhere. Where have I seen it??? and I thought and thought and thought, and finally decided must have \seen it in passing or something. The finally something in my head made me look at the username. Me: eh? maxis...familiar? *about two seconds later* OH HOLY FUCK, OH YEAH I SAW THIS ON MY FRIENDS PAGE A WHILE AGO, BUT DIDNT CHECK.
*dont brick me I know I'm slow*

THIS.
HOMG THIS.
YOU.
ONEOFTEHBESTWRITERSEVER. WTF.
I was all: I thought she was writing bromance?? why does it seem otherwise?? She wouldnt sell her son off to anyone, esp, not the apparent fathers.

Then I read the last line.
me: ...........
.................
,...................
*three seconds later* AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHA XDDDDDDDD

"I know my mother