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geneva2010 February 14 2012, 02:55:28 UTC
great, great update - my goodness that was a wonderfully intense first time. Not to get too clinical, but I always like it when H/D don't head straight to fucking for their first time because, yeah, well no one needs me to elaborate. Anyway, i got too clinical, but you didn't, it was GREAT! Harry's blood boiling was a wonderful image. Love Harry and Hermione together, too. Draco and Ron and Mario Kart were so freaking funny. I could totally see that happening to wizards just learning about the Muggle world.

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maxine_chan March 8 2012, 14:58:31 UTC
I know what you mean! Sometimes when it gets too clinical it takes some of the fun out of it -- I’m glad you liked that part! And Draco and Ron...I have way too much fun writing them. I had that mental image of them playing video games stuck in my head and it just had to come out. XD

Thank you!!

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aline_daryen February 14 2012, 08:06:34 UTC
Oooh! Love it. I like how they're still teens, being childish one moment and grown-up the next.

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maxine_chan March 8 2012, 15:01:39 UTC
Hahaha, they do flip back and forth between the two pretty often. XD

Thank you!!

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pheonixfire39 February 14 2012, 10:28:26 UTC
w.o.w. This chapter was definitely worth the wait!!
Loved Draco and Ron versing each other in mario cart, and Hermione giving Harry her wise advice.
I loved the way Harry just made up his mind and went for it. Very Griffindor of him!
and this line was great "Harry stared dazedly up at the ceiling, his brain rushing to catch up with what had just happened. For fuck’s sake, he hadn’t even hesitated - apparently it really was just that easy! "
The rushed pace and overwhelming feelings were really well written.
SO excited to see how their relationship will change now that Harry has finally come to his senses!!!

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maxine_chan March 8 2012, 15:05:07 UTC
Oh, I’m so glad you think so!! I felt bad disappearing for a bit there.

Haha, I have so much fun writing Draco and Ron, it’s crazy. And I’m glad you liked the scene with Harry and Hermione! I felt like she hadn’t been getting enough screen time lately, so I wanted her to have some good parts. :D

Yeah, it’s about time Harry finally Gryffindor’d up, isn’t it?? There’s more fun times ahead for those two!

THANK YOU!!

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unsernameinuse February 17 2012, 09:07:00 UTC
WEll, there was no making out and fire and brimstone, which I guess is a good thing or you'd have had a ton of angst on your hands. Nevertheless, SUPER AWESOME CHAPTER. Loved it XD

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maxine_chan March 8 2012, 15:06:18 UTC
Thank you so much!! Really glad you enjoyed it! :D

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azrim_midori March 6 2012, 03:49:37 UTC
I want to kick myself dor not reading this sooner, but life sometimes is a real btich.
This was so amazing, and love it, and I want to write poems about it becouse it's just WOW!
You're such a great writer and I can't be more happy of finally reading this. Becouse it was just bloddy time for those two, always Hermione to the rescue, and I like pretty to much this Draco and Ron moments, it's just that they can be such good friends :)
I cant' wait for the next chapter becouse is awesome!!!!

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maxine_chan March 8 2012, 15:07:57 UTC
Haha, no worries! You read it just in time for the new chapter to be ready! It’s just about done, so it should be going up within the next couple of days.

And thank you! I’m really glad you’re enjoying it. Draco and Run are just too fun to write, so there’ll probably be some more scenes with them in the future. XD

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