FIC: talking like i'm falling down stairs [Glee, Sam/Mercedes, PG-13]

[mavilous]

Title: talking like i'm falling down stairs
Rating: PG-13 for language
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Sam Evans/Mercedes Jones, Noah Puckerman, brief Kurt Hummel, mentions of ensemble, (Mr. Schue/Irresponsibility)
Genre: Romance (shmoopiest of shmoops)
Warning: Major DC and minor Marvel allusions, Noah Puckerman as Dear Abby
Spoilers: Season 1 and 2

Comments

[rinnia]

This was so marvelously in character. I adore all the geeky touches, the things that make Sam "Sam" and not "Blond Football Player". Your take on these two is seriously, seriously perfect.

And hooray, no Klaine! It is so hard to find Samcedes without Klaine. The hint of Puckurt is just gravy. Tasty gravy.

[mavilous]

THANK YOU!! Oh gosh, that means so much because I might be a little in love with your writing, so. So! It's like validation, only um, humbler. And touched. And CHEESUS ALL OF THESE SWEET COMMENTS! <33 My canon!Sam is a total cinephile.

I can't stop laughing at how my obvious nod was SUPER OBVIOUS. I'd never include Klaine in anything. Actually, yes I would...if it was to break them up so Puck can hook-up with Kurt. Fuck Klaine in the ear.

[hey_doey_doey]

Have I told you lately that I love you? Cuz I do.

Seriously. I could quote bits of this to you, but really I'd just be quoting the whole thing. But I laughed really loud at the Heath Ledger bit (and also had a bit of a awww poor Heath is dead moment...)

And don't think I didn't catch that teensy glimpse of Puck/Kurt, cuz I did. ;)

[mavilous]

WELL I LOVE YOU MORE SO THERE

When I wrote that Heath comment you were in mind. No lie! I'm absolutely speechless with all the sweet comments I'm getting. NO WORDS and words are all I have, you know? Does that make sense? But thank you, really and truly.

(I have no idea what you're talking about! P/K? I only write things that are canon, brain twin! Silly.

hehehe <3 )

[zaliarose]

This was amazzing! But dang, I can totally relate to that whole 'can't-pluck-up-the-courage' feeling...good thing Sam finally said something in the end huh? :)

So Puck gave some good advice...who knew? And I love that he did something thoughtful for Kurt

[mavilous]

Thank you so much!! <3 It's nice to know that the characters are relatable. *snug!*

Sage!Puck is totally canon. (P/K fan here, couldn't help myself ;P)

[liveyourstory]

Reading this AGAIN just because I love it so. It should be canon, trufax. ;3;/ moarmoarmoar?

[mavilous]

MOAR? MAYBE BB because I'm a glutton for punishment. I need prompts, though.

[liveyourstory]

:3 :3 :3

I don't want to chain you down with godawful prompts :|9 /loss of creativity

[liveyourstory]

Actually I have just had an idea, but it's not totally coherent in my mind yet. I'll get back to you.

[rocktoddy]

Now THIS is what I call quality fic. You know it's gooooood when you can see the actors in your mind's eye perform the dialogue in the fic and it's flawless. How they would react, the body language, their facial expressions. Near perfection what I look for in fic and totally in character! <3 Example bit:

"Mercedes burst out laughing, her free hand clapping over her mouth. “Worst allusion ever!” she gasped, bumping Sam’s open side with her shoulder.

The corners of Sam's mouth went up. “But it makes sense. That’s all that matters. You're not blushing, are you, Miss Jones?”"

I am so love with your dialogue. The authenticity of your Sam and Mercedes shows off the potential of what they could be, and it's exactly THAT why I ship 'em. Again, so totally swooning at your feet. :) #nothingbutpraise

P.s: SAM GIVING HIS THIGHS AN AWKWARD PAT. MAVILOUS, ILU!!! AND ALL THE REST THEREAFTER. IT'S... WORDS, I HAVE NOT. AAAHHHHHHHH. xD

P.p.s: Mercedes Jones, Mercedes Jones. Mmm mmmm honey. *slowclap*

And the ending? OUTSTANDING.

[mavilous]

I honestly don't know how to respond. I'm sort of stunned by how kind this comment is. I don't know whether to blush until I possibly burst into flame, or just cry. You know, because I have SO MANY FEELINGS.

SERIOUSLY THOUGH, thank you so much!! Thank you for reading and commenting and enjoying it and just -- gsxhxsfnbfxdhn

thank you. <3 <3 <3 I AM NOT WORTHY