The Devil You Know 10

May 17, 2012 15:53



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A/N: Since a number of readers have asked, yes, Bruce will be along eventually. ;) I was unfamiliar with the character for a while, but I now have a better understanding/liking of him, so expect him to pop in later, though it might take a few chapters (I've already written through 12 sans Bruce, mwahaha!).

Just... yeah.

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tony stark, mortality, devil you know, nine lives, thor, avengers, all the feelings, aaaaangst, clint barton, loki

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queen0fcups May 17 2012, 20:46:25 UTC
Oh...oh no...I don't want the shit to hit the fan! Sappy is beautiful and I love it and ow. My heart.

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maverikloki August 3 2012, 03:18:59 UTC
TAKE THE ANGST. TAKE IT. >:D

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yuki_n_hidaka May 17 2012, 21:39:18 UTC
Ooo - snow fun! XD So cute! And FINALLY - some love for Loki's Jotun form!

I agree with queenOfcups - I love sappy & I don't want to see shit hitting the fan... Although... I really can't wait to read it!!!

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maverikloki August 3 2012, 03:19:46 UTC
I promise a happy ending for DYK if that makes you feel better. ;)

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selenite_85 May 18 2012, 23:25:34 UTC
This goes deep into my heart. And stays there. You are wonderful for writing this.
Much love
Selenite

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maverikloki August 3 2012, 03:20:04 UTC
Thank you!! *hugs*

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yakalskovich May 19 2012, 12:07:16 UTC
I really like this part:

Tony's hands moved to cup either side of Loki's jaw instead. "Look, I don't know what the Hell happened to make you think this, but you are not a-a monster or a freak or whatever the Hell other bullshit you seem to believe."

The cold air stung in Loki's eyes, and he blinked to dispel the moisture gathering there.

"You're Loki. There's no one else like you in the Universe, and I know you think that means you don't belong anywhere, but so what? That's their loss, not yours."

With the particulars changed, that's in a nutshell the best thing to say to to anybody who hate themselves because they are [X] in a world where you're supposed to be [Y]. Very well put! **applauds**

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maverikloki August 3 2012, 03:18:37 UTC
Thank you!! I've gotten some wonderful feedback on those lines, and I'm rather proud of them now. ;) We all have trouble fitting in sometimes, and we have the tendency to blame ourselves for it, when we shouldn't.

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annakas May 19 2012, 15:47:14 UTC
Ohhh Tony just realized his feelings for Loki but lamely wussed out of his confession. I can't really blame him though, unintentionally blurting out a confession like that is mortifying an scary as hell. I am glad though that Tony came to the conclusion that it is true, if now he will only have the courage and chance to make a real confession.

Poor Loki got his heart mistakenly broken. Though yayy for him also loving Tony, even if his confession was just a whisper for himself.

Things will probably get worse before these two make things clear between them!

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maverikloki August 3 2012, 03:16:34 UTC
These boys! Their angst knows no limits. :P

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