A Temporary Madness: A1, P26

[mattmetzger]

Title: A Temporary Madness
Summary: The story of two lives becoming one - which is easier said than done when one's divorced, the other's neurotic, and both suffer from the unfortunate malady of being friends with James T. Kirk.
Overall Rating: NC17.
Overall Warnings: strong language, explicit sexual content, moderate violence.

Chapter Specifics:
- 2,

Comments

[greybar123]

why I love the way you write: using a description of fall for their relationship, "a grey slushiy affair that stank of rotting leaves and boredom", making their dialogue real conversation, reminding the reader that continued living sometimes requires an excuse. I am not surprised you are now a published novelist. You wiil do great things. Go forth and be brillian!

[rabidchild]

My goodness, congratulations on the contract! That is massively cool. You must keep us all updated with publishing date and things so we can go out and buy it and make you a rich man. :)

On to this chapter, it is so realistic how Spock explains himself here, and so emotional. The poor man, so hung up on his privacy and then to get no sympathy from the one person who ought to have given it unconditionally. And Leonard is just full of win, pushing Spock until he finally wears him down. I'll admit I was concerned this would break them up. Now I can't wait to see more smoochies.

[illariy]

Congratulations! Your writing is great and now it's going to be shared with a wider audience and also, monies! Whee, what exciting news!!! :D

Very enjoyable chapter; I am glad to see them moving forward.

[alaria]

Congratulations on the contract!!! That is wonderful! :)

I'm catching up on this story finally - I haven't had time to read in weeks!! And I completely love it! Spock asking Bones not to stop pushing is just so right - never stop pushing, Bones!