BOOK TWO: putting out your fires with gasoline (8/?)

[lucia_tanaka]

Table of Contents

Title: putting out your fires with gasoline, Book Two of The Matter of Chicago
Rating/Warnings: R for violence.
Word Count: This chapter: 8,641. This book: 45,876.

Chapter One | Chapter Two | Chapter Three | Chapter Four | Chapter Five | Chapter Six | Chapter Seven

Notes: It's time for another megachapter! Also, I'm very sorry

Comments

[sunflower1343]

This was amazing. Especially the part with Shiro. And you can write action scenes. My hand was over my mouth at one point to keep me from squeaking. XD

[lucia_tanaka]

Maybe I can write them, but it's akin to having a root canal for me-- necessary process, but very painful. Glad it worked for you though!

[lucia_tanaka]

I think after dealing with John and Harry so much, Hendricks needs to get his own life for a bit. And any excuse to have Gard around is awesome. 8D 8D 8D

[clair1973]

my first post here but my god that was good.. like shelly i also had my hand over my mouth in parts!

i like the new layout as well! :D XD

[lucia_tanaka]

I'm just finishing futzing with the layout. Lemme know if you have any issues. Thanks for reading!

[lucia_tanaka]

Yeah, I realized the majority is not a fan of light-on-dark like I am, so I wanted to make the fic comm more accessible. Hope you like!

[forestgreen]

This was utterly amazing. I sat at the edge of my seat, wanting to know what would happen next. The pacing, the descriptions, the emotions underneath everything. Just brilliant.

The horror of they walking on Shiro's blood and finding the remains of Shiro's body was so well executed and the soulgaze in the end was perfect.

A very powerful chapter.

[lucia_tanaka]

Thank you, that's extremely reassuring. :haaaates this chapter: Glad you liked!