Josh Fitchetola. What a classic name. Love the camaraderie you create between the 'charm brothers.' Randy's party brought back some teenage memories for me. (*Mostly* good.) That Lisa's a piece of work. I like the way that you reverse the gender roles in this fic. In films, TV, literature and in life, teenage boys are usually portrayed as the 'aggressors'; out to get sex without any emotional attachment. The girl is usually seen as the 'victim' or as someone who is being used. I like that Tony has that sensitive, emotional and vulnerable side. "The tiny scrap of material imitating underwear." Heh, heh. Gunny's back!! Off to read next bit. (I've forgotten what happens. He better not spank him again.)
Thanks for the comments for this part. Seriously. It amazes me to see what stands out for different readers in each section and, I have to admit, this tweaking process has given me the chance to restate *many* ideas and add others. It's time consuming but pretty rewarding.
Yep, Gunny's back in the picture again...finally. Hope his interaction with Tony seems appropriate to you-
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Love the camaraderie you create between the 'charm brothers.'
Randy's party brought back some teenage memories for me. (*Mostly* good.)
That Lisa's a piece of work.
I like the way that you reverse the gender roles in this fic. In films, TV, literature and in life, teenage boys are usually portrayed as the 'aggressors'; out to get sex without any emotional attachment. The girl is usually seen as the 'victim' or as someone who is being used. I like that Tony has that sensitive, emotional and vulnerable side.
"The tiny scrap of material imitating underwear." Heh, heh.
Gunny's back!! Off to read next bit. (I've forgotten what happens. He better not spank him again.)
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Yep, Gunny's back in the picture again...finally. Hope his interaction with Tony seems appropriate to you-
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