Comments | matt1993: Those poor delicious Lumas!

matt1993

Those poor delicious Lumas!

Nov 27, 2010 22:21

It's a lot easier to write cutscenes because, for the most part, I can just take the dialogue from Super Mario Galaxy 2, add Luigi, Enya, and Moya whenever Mario is mentioned, and add occasional comments from Moya :)

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cherry, bowser, planets, yoshi star galaxy, roma ryan, orange, dinner, jealousy, grape, star festival, school, cutscenes, star bits, blueberry, moya, warp pipe, meteors, peach, complaining, not making sense, super mario galaxy 2, luigi, "moya's space log", starship mario, stars, lubba, wii remote, luma, enya, spaceships, mario, nicky ryan, team brennario, thanksgiving, mushroom kingdom

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pathvain_aelien January 20 2011, 15:31:43 UTC

"Master Luma made an adorable squeaking noise." You need to play the game again soon, I miss Master Luma. :)

"(grape? Must taste test later)" Moya's hilarious.

"Then again, ever since that green pipe came out of the ground at my dinner, hardly anything has made sense, so why should this?" True. Maybe she actually hit her head and is dreaming all of this?

"Those poor delicious Lumas!" I gasped.

"What was that?" replied Purple Diaper Man. Oops."
-BEST EVER. I love Purple Diaper Man in this part. He's so funny. Does he actually say most of the things written here in the game, or did you make them up? Either way, it's funny. This is my favorite part so far.

matt1993 January 21 2011, 01:36:26 UTC

True. Maybe she actually hit her head and is dreaming all of this?

No because to me, "it was all just a dream" seems like a clichèd ending (especially compared to the one that I recently came up with). :)

Does he actually say most of the things written here in the game, or did you make them up?

The part where Moya lets it slip that she thinks Lumas are delicious is, of course, made up because no one in the actual game speculates on, or claims to know, what Lumas taste like. However, whenever I write about a cutscene, I do start with what's actually said in the game, but then I try to add a decent amount of comments by Moya (some spoken by her, some just written) and have the NPC(s) respond to whatever comments she actually says. I also, of course, change "Mario" to "all of you" or "Mario, Luigi, Enya, and Moya" or whatever every time it occurs in the dialogue. :)

pathvain_aelien January 20 2011, 15:32:42 UTC

Ooh, can I write a drabble where Moya wakes up after dreaming all this? I was thinking something with Lumas in her birthday cake. :)

matt1993 January 21 2011, 01:37:01 UTC

Sure :)

Just have a note that it being a dream isn't canon (even my canon), okay?

pathvain_aelien January 23 2011, 17:05:01 UTC

Yep.

pathvain_aelien January 20 2011, 15:33:06 UTC

Hey, where's the next part??

matt1993 January 21 2011, 01:40:34 UTC

Would you believe Area 51?...The Hellmouth?...Hyrule?...Zim's base?...A black hole?...Cerulean City?...Frasier's apartment?...The fourth dimension?...Garfield's food bowl?

Alright, alright. I haven't written it yet. :(

pathvain_aelien January 20 2011, 15:33:53 UTC

Aw. I hate getting interested in something and then I can't keep reading/watching/whatever. You should write the next part!! :)

Please??

matt1993 January 21 2011, 01:41:29 UTC

I'll alternate between working on userpics and working on MSL, okay? :)

EDIT: Or I could work on MSL on odd-numbered days and userpics on even-numbered days. That way, there will be slightly more MSL to make up for the hiatus. :)

pathvain_aelien January 23 2011, 17:03:31 UTC

Sounds good!