Comments | matt1969: NCIS: Stillwater, Pre-Dawn PG 1/1

matt1969

NCIS: Stillwater, Pre-Dawn PG 1/1

Apr 18, 2009 19:55

TITLE: Stillwater, Pre-Dawn
AUTHOR: Matt
SUMMARY: Not only had it snowed during the night, it was still snowing. Gibbs/Abby
RATING: PG
WORD COUNT: 716
NOTE: Unlike the majority of my writing, this piece has not been beta-read. This is because I don’t know if my regular beta watches NCIS, and I don’t have anyone else to whom I can send stuff without ( Read more... )

ncis, gibbs/abby

Comments 16

murgy31 April 19 2009, 00:34:20 UTC

great story!

matt1969 April 19 2009, 07:29:34 UTC

Thanks.

zackery_faelan April 19 2009, 00:36:18 UTC

matt1969 April 19 2009, 07:29:54 UTC

Thanks.

autumnfairytale April 19 2009, 02:10:43 UTC

That was just lovely! I liked it very much.

I only noticed one mistake and that was the letter s instead of an a in a sentence in the last paragraph, but it took nothing away from my enjoyment of your fic. I only pointed it out because I thought you might want to know. :)

I hope that you will be gracing us with more, I look forward to reading anything that you are willing to share.

matt1969 April 19 2009, 07:30:52 UTC

Thanks for your review. The typo has been located and duly corrected!

I do have a longer piece in process, so you do have something to look forward to.

chozen_rogue April 19 2009, 03:23:02 UTC

Love it - so sweet and touching!

matt1969 April 19 2009, 07:31:40 UTC

Thanks.

ncis_love April 19 2009, 03:33:06 UTC

So sweet. i love Gibbs realizing he's a sucker for what abby wants (i.e. building a snow man, or a snowball fight).

Great story!

matt1969 April 19 2009, 07:34:02 UTC

Thanks.

Gibbs lets Abby get away with a lot in front of everyone else. I'm sure when it's just the two of them that he consciously lets her get away with a lot more *g*