Very nice. I've always wondered about the parallels between Adria and Shifu, how opposite they were, but oddly, fundamentally, came into the world and to their parents in a very similar way. This was perfect to how I see all four relationships.
“I thought you’d be glad to see me back. I expected to have you leaping all over me. I was looking forward to fighting you off.”
hahaha!
Vala sniffed. “There’s more to my life than just you, Daniel Jackson. Perhaps your ego needs to realize that.”
Oh *sobers* I love it Vala gets serious.
“We should never have left her the first time,” Vala added. I was hoping there would be a way.
He seized on an idea. “Did Qetesh know of the harcesis?”
“It’s a myth.”
He shook his head. “It’s not. His name is Shifu.” Nice ball-change!
“Your wife.” For Vala, there was no separation. Good observation.
“I miss him,” he finally told her. “Just as I miss the rest of my family.” Ohhh, Daniel :(
Despite the non-human, all-knowing, potentially evil characteristics of the children who should never have come into this word, it would always, always be alright to grieve for them.Now, I wasn't sure if that should be 'world'? Or am I just not reading it right? *looks again
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hahaha!
Vala sniffed. “There’s more to my life than just you, Daniel Jackson. Perhaps your ego needs to realize that.”
Oh *sobers* I love it Vala gets serious.
“We should never have left her the first time,” Vala added.
I was hoping there would be a way.
He seized on an idea. “Did Qetesh know of the harcesis?”
“It’s a myth.”
He shook his head. “It’s not. His name is Shifu.”
Nice ball-change!
“Your wife.” For Vala, there was no separation.
Good observation.
“I miss him,” he finally told her. “Just as I miss the rest of my family.”
Ohhh, Daniel :(
Despite the non-human, all-knowing, potentially evil characteristics of the children who should never have come into this word, it would always, always be alright to grieve for them.Now, I wasn't sure if that should be 'world'? Or am I just not reading it right? *looks again ( ... )
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amazing job on this. so well done I loved it so much i went back and read it twice. so perfect. thank you for sharing this.
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