[Oneshot] Jealous

May 19, 2011 23:04

Title: Jealous
Author: matsukisara
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance, Drama and Smut
Pairing: Jaechun

Summary: Jaejoong wasn't happy when he saw Yoochun dancing with a girl from their concert in Beijing

Jae is jealous )

jyj: kim junsu, pairing: jaechun, jyj: park yoochun, jyj: kim jaejoong, length: oneshot, others: fanfic

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pikanyan May 22 2011, 11:42:59 UTC
*_* love it, thanks for the nice story \^_^/ I want translate it into Russian, don't you mind?

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matsukisara May 22 2011, 11:59:33 UTC
You're welcome ^O^ I'm glad you love it ^~^ And sure you can translate it into Russian but make sure to credit my story *O*

And I love your DP of Yamapi ^O^

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pikanyan May 22 2011, 13:05:48 UTC
oh, sure=))) I'll credit it \^_______^/ *hugs*

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matsukisara May 23 2011, 10:34:27 UTC
*Hugs back* Thank you so much and I want to see it too if it's okay ^~^

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mikimasachika May 28 2011, 00:46:09 UTC
oh my goodness,

I breathed before roaming my hands over his exposed upper body but I saw a little scratch near to his tattoo. “How did you get this?” I asked while touching it. Yoochun look where I was touching and said “I think I got the scratch from the back-up dancer. Maybe her nails were long and that’s how I got it… I think…”

I glared at him, “Let’s fix that” I whispered then leaned down to lick the scratch and bit it making Yoochun groaned. He felt a little pain after I bit him and he tried to look on what I did and saw a little blood on his chest “Fuck Jae, what did you do?”

I licked the blood and started sucking it and he moaned. I look at him “Now this is a proof that you belong to me” I said while touching where I bit him. Yoochun started to kiss me and he turn around making me the one laying on the bed.

i had talked bout this with my friend,really.. and you made it into a story??? it's not dejavu rite??

thank you so much,dear *hugs*

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matsukisara May 28 2011, 16:37:42 UTC
Eh *O* Really you did O_O Uwah! Then that's kinda awesome and also scary but totally awesome ^O^

You're welcome and thank you for reading ^~^ I'm glad you love it *~* *Hugs back*

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sab08 May 28 2011, 08:34:04 UTC
woah sara! i didn't know that you can write good smut! keep it up.. :D
this is awesome!! ^^
and jealous!jae <3<3<3
why do a sexy concept? they can be sexy enough without the help of sexy (touching) back up dancers..

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matsukisara May 28 2011, 16:39:53 UTC
Uwah *O* Smut is still scary for me but yeah I'll write more ^O^

Yes! jelous!jae is a must ^~^ And yes why do a sexy concept when they're already sexy *O*

Anyway thanks for reading Sab ^^ Glad you love it

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sab08 May 29 2011, 13:43:46 UTC
i think i won't try writing smut,, hahaha.. it's really not my forte.. ^^
hahaha. they can do it withy each other on stage. without even touching themselves.. fans would be more saitsfied.. what do you think? :DDDDD

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matsukisara May 29 2011, 17:10:37 UTC
Hehe! It's okay we really have our own forte to write ^~^
Yes! It will be more satisfying without the back-up dancers ^O^

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matsuyaney May 29 2011, 15:54:45 UTC
XDD Jae is jealous with the female dancers~ he better stop adding female back up dancers on their tours~ lol

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matsukisara May 29 2011, 17:12:49 UTC
Yes! They should stop adding female bak-up dancers just to make a sexy concept >_< They're already sexy ^O^

And thank you for reading ^~^ And I love your DP again *O* Nino ^~^ That guy is 17FOREVER

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matsuyaney May 30 2011, 03:21:07 UTC
it kinda hurts u know to see them with girls~ lol

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aquadaniluv June 8 2011, 05:11:31 UTC
loved it!!! i adore jaechun!!! :)

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matsukisara June 8 2011, 13:38:55 UTC
Thanks ^O^ I'm glad you loved it ^~^ And yes Jaechun are totally adorable *O*

I hope you can read the sequel of this called 'Let's Share' ^O^ and I hope you can read my other Jaechun fics but it's okay if you don't want to O.o

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aquadaniluv July 16 2011, 06:53:24 UTC
i most deff will read em :)
keep up the great work! fighting!

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matsukisara July 17 2011, 05:24:43 UTC
Uwah! Thank you so much ^O^

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