Comments | masu_trout: Cities in Sand

masu_trout

Cities in Sand

Jul 31, 2011 21:58

Title: Cities of Sand
Fandom: Pokemon
Rating: T for Teen
Characters/Pairing: Red, Green (Red/Green)
Word Count: 2,145
Summary: Red and Green go on vacation. (Because, really, there's only so many times you can lose at Go Fish.) Written for daicheto, who asked for Red/Green fluff on a beach.

( It's three in the morning and you want to make sandcastles? )

advent challenge, fanfic, fandom:pokemon

Comments 8

rosehiptea August 1 2011, 05:11:04 UTC

Eeeh! This isn't usually one of my pairings but you pulled it off so well here and I loved it. Really fun, and I loved Green's denial and the whole little plot, and their flying competition.

masu_trout August 1 2011, 15:03:40 UTC

Thank you so much! That's a really great compliment. *Blushes*

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masu_trout August 1 2011, 15:04:18 UTC

:D Thank you!

beeskies August 2 2011, 08:57:07 UTC

hnng. this was such a wonderful way to start my day. c: i really love how you wrote the boys and their antics; really, really well done. <3

masu_trout August 2 2011, 20:39:10 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

beeskies August 3 2011, 07:40:38 UTC

you're very welcome. c:

daicheto August 10 2011, 08:35:27 UTC

I'm so late to comment, I'm sorry! I intended to but my internet died, and I forgot .____. Anyway, this fic is seriously really beautiful and pretty, I love your creativity to turn out that they're going to the beach 'at night' when there's no fangirls chasing XD Love the end! thank you so much for fulfilling my troublesome request, I really like it ♥

masu_trout August 10 2011, 13:19:07 UTC

Thank you so much! <3