Wonderful! I loved the slow evolution in proximity with the Master, with his casual touches. I like how you sprinkled references about "all the Master wants", which you reinforce with the brilliant, which perfectly sum up the fic and give it a strong conclusion. I also thought the following imagery was great: ...and the Doctor moans raggedly, like he can't prevent it, like the Master has a hand on his larynx and a grasp on his soul, and that's all the Master wants.
NNGH NO I HADN'T SEEN THIS. I remember you showing it to me, but then I never knew or found out when it got posted, and then I forgot to ask, because I lose! AT LEAST I'VE READ IT NOW.
I still love the whole of the It doesn't seem much at first paragraph A LOT, because, idk, I just do, the tone of it (should I start trying to comment on your fic when I'm not tired and incoherent? PROBABLY YES).
When it all comes to a head, most people are alerted to the incident by the sheer volume of it: the Master is bellowing something in a tongue that no-one can follow, and he's inches away from the Doctor's face, and he's gripping the Doctor by the hips, and the Doctor is merely there. ALSO THIS. I'm genuinely useless right now at trying to explain why I like stuff, and I can only insist repeatedly that I do. I DO. the doctor being merely there.
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Thank you so much! I know it was kind of a slightly unusual request, but it's utterly marvelous :D
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I still love the whole of the It doesn't seem much at first paragraph A LOT, because, idk, I just do, the tone of it (should I start trying to comment on your fic when I'm not tired and incoherent? PROBABLY YES).
When it all comes to a head, most people are alerted to the incident by the sheer volume of it: the Master is bellowing something in a tongue that no-one can follow, and he's inches away from the Doctor's face, and he's gripping the Doctor by the hips, and the Doctor is merely there.
ALSO THIS. I'm genuinely useless right now at trying to explain why I like stuff, and I can only insist repeatedly that I do. I DO. the doctor being merely there.
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