Title: Gag Order [Oneshot]
Pairing: Baekhyun/Chen/D.O, Chen/D.O
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Threesome, oral sex, dirty talk
Summary: Baekhyun never seems to shut up and when he upsets Jongdae, Kyungsoo finds a way to both shut him up and make Jongdae feel better all at once.
A/N: 3.5K PWP. Fill for
this prompt on
exopromptmeme. Late is better than never, right
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i mean, wow, this is so sexy. i love it how the two basically use baekhyun's mouth as they wish lol. plus dirty talk. and baekhyun likes it. slutty baekhyun is oh so hot.
"Jongdae just rolls his eyes and reaches across the older man to snag a tissue and let it flutter down onto Baekhyun’s smug face." and then they go back to bickering; this is so in-character XD
and the idea (I know it was a prompt but yeah, you did it justice) that it's sort of an apology/punishment for being an annoying chatterbox is just wonderful XD
thank you for taking your time and writing it, i enjoyed it a lot! :)
edit: i just noticed the title, omg XD
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Normally I do the title last, but for this I started with the title lol!
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Kris and Joonmyun are such parents. Baekhyun was such a brat; it was like all the adults in the family pushing the kid to play nice, share toys, don't raise his voice, etc. That was cute.
Then things took a different direction with Kyungsoo's smarmy grin. Gotta know something's up when that makes an appearance.
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I honestly think Kyungsoo is a little evil...he has the eyes that could steal a person's soul...
I love that you think it's good enough for a reread!!!!
<3
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First off: THANK YOU FOR FILLING MY PROMPT!
And yeah, I'm sorry if this was difficult for you to write but glad you got through it!
This was great! Best way to shut up baekhyun :9
But I wonder why jongdae was down in the beginning for being unusually quiet?? :c
But I love little manly/dom!soo~ he's the best this way :3 that evil little bastard haha love him.
I thought it finished until kyungsoo got his turn and ehehe oh yes!
I look forward to that next time, jongdae eheh.
THANKS AGAIN FOR THE FILL! And sorry for the crappy comment i usually give longer ones but I'm using my iPod so it's hard to type with oTL
Much love <333 from:
~bonnieyuki~
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I had this whole thing with Jongdae being sad because SM wouldn't give him a day off to see his mom, but it felt like it wouldn't mesh with the rest of the story, which is just pwp! (#/ㅅ\#)
I'm so happy my OP liked it~~~~ I always start and then never finish things and when I do it's been so long I always fear the OP won't see it lol
Also I cannot handle LJ on my ipod, logging in is the worst :/
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thanks for writing ~
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