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Mass Effect Kink Meme: PART XX

Oct 28, 2013 13:24

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The High Cost of Perfection 1.4.1 anonymous November 20 2013, 13:40:47 UTC

How this became her obsession, Miranda could only guess. At 106 years old, Liara was barely a teenager by asari standards, easily infatuated with hobbies like the protheans, or people representing her dream life. Idolizing Shepard seemed logical in a self-centered world of a teenage girl. It didn’t matter what Shepard wanted, because even if he didn’t see things her way, she would convince him. She loved him and he would love her back and he was smart enough to understand eventually ( ... )

A!A The High Cost of Perfection 1.12 anonymous November 27 2013, 23:13:56 UTC

Honestly, if I were a reader and the A!A stopped at this point, my head would just explode. I gave it a shot but I just can't stop here. You opened the door, anon, now the storm's a-comin'! :)

Re: A!A The High Cost of Perfection 1.12 anonymous November 28 2013, 16:03:00 UTC

And I can't wait for it :) Also, the rewritten last part is very nice!

Re: The High Cost of Perfection 1.12 anonymous November 25 2013, 09:28:30 UTC

Mmmm I love a rapey Liara. I hope she gets Oriana involved in some way.

Re: The High Cost of Perfection 1.12 anonymous November 26 2013, 07:44:02 UTC

I really want to see Miranda turn the tables on Liara at the end of this. I never liked liara, but damn...

The High Cost of Perfection 1.12 rewrite anonymous November 27 2013, 23:10:26 UTC

Miranda forced herself to sit, still reluctant to raise her head. She felt stronger now, but her lap was still on fire and the uncomfortable sensation of the invasion refused to go away ( ... )

Re: The High Cost of Perfection 1.12 rewrite anonymous November 29 2013, 21:22:32 UTC

Chapter two starts here:

http://masseffectkink.livejournal.com/7674.html?thread=36933882#t36933882

A!A - The High Cost of Perfection 1.12 anonymous November 27 2013, 23:15:42 UTC

To all anons: thanks for the feedback, I was worried about evil!Liara a bit. Thanks for the encouragement. More will come soon.

Re: A!A - The High Cost of Perfection 1.12 anonymous November 28 2013, 09:32:59 UTC

Bookmarked.

Re: A!A - The High Cost of Perfection 1.12 anonymous November 28 2013, 10:33:11 UTC

I'm seconding the anon above who wants to see Liara get her just deserts. Liara may be a bitch, but Karma's infinitely more vicious...

Re: A!A - The High Cost of Perfection 1.12 anonymous November 29 2013, 05:49:17 UTC

Another passerby anon here
dark thing, but really great writing and I sure will read on if there's more to come.

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