Re: OP Wrote her own fill "Strange Happenings" 8
anonymous
April 27 2013, 22:46:06 UTC
A/N_ The beta and I have decided that trust (between turian males that is) is the sexiest thing ever.
Also, this is turning out a lot longer than I expected. I haven’t even got to the kinky bits yet.
Current vote: 1 for radiation 1 Prothean tech
PART 8
Saren was just stepping out of the bathroom when Nihlus entered their bedroom. She had slipped back into the same set of clothes he’d loaned her and was toweling off her face. He could still faintly smell her interest in him and it made his heart pound.
“I want you.” He said and could have kicked himself. So much for slowing down. I’ve got maybe ten seconds before she kills me.“Get out Nihlus.” Saren hissed
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Re: OP Wrote her own fill "Strange Happenings" 8
anonymous
April 28 2013, 18:05:00 UTC
OP_A!A here Anon above, Yep, Saren did give in quick and Nihlus will notice that. But Saren's also not done resisting him. And my brain's not working right now so I can't make a valid point, but there's a reason for Saren being tame.
Re: OP Wrote her own fill "Strange Happenings" 8
anonymous
April 28 2013, 19:13:28 UTC
OP_A!A again, lol that's good to hear, not that I thought you were. I've got more written but I'm less happy with it than I was at the start. Saren is really hard to write and I'm staying out of his POV to keep from mind-fucking myself, as a result Nihlus is only noticing about half of what he/she's going through. But they really do trust each other, and maybe there's even the stirrings of love there too. So yeah, this thing is giving me a heap of trouble, but I will finish it. Just waiting for my beta to come back help. And longwinded A!A is longwinded.
Re: OP Wrote her own fill "Strange Happenings" 10
anonymous
April 30 2013, 03:50:38 UTC
A/N_ The beta says that even though Saren is in a female body, s(he) is still fundamentally male and would act as such. I totally agree. Also, it’s my headcannon Nihlus is a sweetie
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Re: OP Wrote her own fill "Strange Happenings" 10
anonymous
April 30 2013, 13:35:09 UTC
How does someone act "fundamentally male"? I thought that Saren's insecurity was because of the change, not because women are biologically some fucking fragile flowers or some other shit?
Re: OP Wrote her own fill "Strange Happenings" 10
anonymous
April 30 2013, 13:42:47 UTC
OP_A!A It is because of the change, and by fundamentally male I simply meant in body language and the mannerisms. I was not trying to imply that women are delicate flowers because they're not. Men act different than women on a whole bunch of levels. They walk different, sit different, stand different and talk different too. That's all I meant, yeah, Saren is currently female, but is still going to act male.
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Also, this is turning out a lot longer than I expected. I haven’t even got to the kinky bits yet.
Current vote:
1 for radiation
1 Prothean tech
PART 8
Saren was just stepping out of the bathroom when Nihlus entered their bedroom. She had slipped back into the same set of clothes he’d loaned her and was toweling off her face. He could still faintly smell her interest in him and it made his heart pound.
“I want you.” He said and could have kicked himself. So much for slowing down. I’ve got maybe ten seconds before she kills me.“Get out Nihlus.” Saren hissed ( ... )
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Anon above,
Yep, Saren did give in quick and Nihlus will notice that. But Saren's also not done resisting him.
And my brain's not working right now so I can't make a valid point, but there's a reason for Saren being tame.
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lol that's good to hear, not that I thought you were. I've got more written but I'm less happy with it than I was at the start. Saren is really hard to write and I'm staying out of his POV to keep from mind-fucking myself, as a result Nihlus is only noticing about half of what he/she's going through. But they really do trust each other, and maybe there's even the stirrings of love there too. So yeah, this thing is giving me a heap of trouble, but I will finish it. Just waiting for my beta to come back help.
And longwinded A!A is longwinded.
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It is because of the change, and by fundamentally male I simply meant in body language and the mannerisms. I was not trying to imply that women are delicate flowers because they're not. Men act different than women on a whole bunch of levels. They walk different, sit different, stand different and talk different too.
That's all I meant, yeah, Saren is currently female, but is still going to act male.
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