Re: Distraction [3/3]
anonymous
September 25 2011, 10:42:20 UTC
But just as he was about to bring up his omni and dial the number, the boy’s father emerged from corridor A3, carried on long, hurried strides and glancing behind his shoulder. Saren absently took note of his dark-gray medium armor and the Haliat Stilleto attached to his right thigh slot. A mercenary.
“Nihlus,” the father said, snapping his fingers to indicate urgency, and the boy ran off.
Saren opened his mouth to say something, but then forgot what it was, he forgot about the boy and the father and the people around and everything as Solas appeared on the top of the escalator, scanning the crowd for the familiar face. Saren leaped from the bench and waved an eager hand, then ran forward to meet him, stopping just short of slamming into him
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Re: Distraction [Epilogue]
anonymous
October 2 2011, 02:03:24 UTC
OP here. Wow, you don't know how happy you made me by writing this epilogue. It's simply perfect. Seeing these two not hating each other is a nice change of pace from other fills I've read. Much love for this, and thanks again!
“Nihlus,” the father said, snapping his fingers to indicate urgency, and the boy ran off.
Saren opened his mouth to say something, but then forgot what it was, he forgot about the boy and the father and the people around and everything as Solas appeared on the top of the escalator, scanning the crowd for the familiar face. Saren leaped from the bench and waved an eager hand, then ran forward to meet him, stopping just short of slamming into him ( ... )
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And feel free to prompt away...I am, unfortunately, slow at writing, so you can just as well give me a head-start :)
Not at all silly, and pleased to meet you too.
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