Re: If At First You Don't Succeed...
anonymous
August 12 2011, 04:29:12 UTC
Jane closed her eyes against a montage of memories that ranged from losing her virginity up against the wall of a nightclub bathroom on her first night free of basic to the accusing eyes of her various boyfriends over the years, all of whom had started out thrilled to be dating a decorated servicewoman (and eventually, a hero) but eventually grew sour when she neglected to perform on command. It was always somehow her fault. As though she’d blamed them for failing to be man enough to satisfy the Famous Commander Shepard
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Re: If At First You Don't Succeed...
anonymous
August 12 2011, 18:02:40 UTC
Author!Anon here. I'm really glad people liked the fic. It's been a while since I've been able to crank out decent smut fic. Had a long dry spell there, but looks like I'm back in fic country.
I'm really kind of astounded by the positive response to the more um... educational parts of the fic. I was trying to keep it from getting too pedantic and I hope I succeeded, but it is a subject that strikes home for me too which is why I ended up picking that prompt even though it's close to a year old.
Re: If At First You Don't Succeed...
anonymous
August 23 2011, 10:52:45 UTC
Oh God, this is too good for words.
You just so happen to have the same armor and voice kinks as me. Thinking about Garrus saying that was blowing my mind. Jesus Christ, I'll be in my bunk.
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I'm really kind of astounded by the positive response to the more um... educational parts of the fic. I was trying to keep it from getting too pedantic and I hope I succeeded, but it is a subject that strikes home for me too which is why I ended up picking that prompt even though it's close to a year old.
Thanks for all your great feedback!
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This...was perfect. Very awesome that you tackled a highly plausible 'reason' for Shep's inability to loosen up. Perhaps I should do the same .__.;
xD This was lovely and just what I was looking for. The humor put here and there was cute as well.
<3
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"I win at everything forever."
I LOLed so hard at this.
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You just so happen to have the same armor and voice kinks as me. Thinking about Garrus saying that was blowing my mind. Jesus Christ, I'll be in my bunk.
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