Re: Floodgates (7/7)
anonymous
June 14 2011, 21:50:44 UTC
Plannin' to write another. I'm having fun with this, especially the whole telling it through Kolyat's perspective - he's such a fun brat to write for. Again, I'm open to suggestions!
Re: Floodgates (7/7)
anonymous
June 14 2011, 22:09:27 UTC
AWESOME, ANON! I am enjoying this story so much you wouldn't believe it!
I am still voting for MShep/Thane reveal to Kolyat just so he too would have a few surprises! :D
Other than that, maybe it'd be nice how the three of them are functioning together? Trying to be a family, three generations of Krioses? ...That's an almost scary mental image. XD Also, Thane having to babysit and Kolyat calling him every half an hour to make sure he hasn't screwed up somewhere. Also, Kolyat coming home or walking by and seeing Thane and his son "dancing crazy" and his reaction to that.
Forgive me, anon, I am full of suggestions, I can't help it! You asked! :D
A vote for Thane shipping!
anonymous
June 15 2011, 22:10:40 UTC
Third, passerby-anon agrees that Thane/M!Shep would be pretty awesome in this story. Not as a focal point, of course, but just as another element of anti-social-norms that this story seems to be playing with. Especially if we get to see this Shepard (who is oodles of fun despite his minor roll--very good job with that, author-anon) interact with Vasaed, I'm all for it. It could be really, really interesting as a small facet of this story, if the author-anon decided to go there.
Re: A vote for no thane shipping
anonymous
July 25 2012, 12:05:21 UTC
I agree. The author is obviously portraying realistic scenarios and reactions -keeping the characters very IC- and Male Shepard with Thane is not even available in the games, so it wouldn't be canon or realistic at all.
Re: ME2: Thane was 39!
anonymous
June 14 2011, 13:52:24 UTC
Indeed. Though the elder Mr Krios isn't a stranger to having children at a young age. Assuming that the years on Kahje are more or less the same as those on Earth, he would've been in his early 20s at most when Kolyat was born.
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I am still voting for MShep/Thane reveal to Kolyat just so he too would have a few surprises! :D
Other than that, maybe it'd be nice how the three of them are functioning together? Trying to be a family, three generations of Krioses? ...That's an almost scary mental image. XD Also, Thane having to babysit and Kolyat calling him every half an hour to make sure he hasn't screwed up somewhere. Also, Kolyat coming home or walking by and seeing Thane and his son "dancing crazy" and his reaction to that.
Forgive me, anon, I am full of suggestions, I can't help it! You asked! :D
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Well, if possible anyway.
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This anon thoroughly ENJOYED this story. So immensely. I think it was beautifully done. I can't name a single thing I didn't like.
Thanks for writing.
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