my arm from the elbow downIt all goes wrong when Garrus takes a concussive shot to the head. It’s a once in a blue moon shot, the kind that he takes every time he picks up a rifle but even in the turian military it was agreed that what Vakarian can do with a rifle is something like art and a little like magic. That doesn’t mean he takes a battering ram to the face any better than most. Shepard sees him go down on the platform next to Tali at the precise moment the quarian’s attack drone is wrecked by a Blue Sun engineer. Shit
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Right. Focus she has to… focus. She can’t think with all this noise in her head and Garrus is bleeding. She wants him to stop… bleeding. Her arms give out and she collapses against the turian. He drags her, nerveless and dizzy, behind cover. He’s got his heavy pistol out, is firing, but they are out of thermal clips and luck and time and everything else. Garrus has his arm around her middle, has pulled her against his chest, between his knees, shielding her as he fires the last of his ammo to cover Tali’s retreat. When he runs out of clips he swears and just wraps his arms around her and says, “I’m sorry, Commander
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Part 3 (non-con warning)
anonymous
June 5 2011, 08:27:30 UTC
They drag the two Normandy crewmates apart. Garrus tries to hold onto her and she grips his wrist until they jerk her back and she loses him. The lieutenant in charge goes to Garrus first and slams the stock of his rifle into his face, once, twice, three times. He’s already concussed. When the lieutenant pounds the butt of the weapon into his gut, he throws up and half loses consciousness. Blood drips on the floor, dark blue. Familiar. Like Omega. Shepard wants to kill them all. Her guts glow with the coals of her hate
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Part 4 (non-con warning)
anonymous
June 5 2011, 08:30:13 UTC
She can hear Garrus yelling, fighting. Oh god, let them not hurt him. Let them focus on her. They can fuck her, they can cut her, they can take her limbs, her right arm from the elbow down and they will not have injured her as vitally as they will if they touch Garrus. What the fuck does she care for her new body, built of Cerberus money and desperation?
This is her last clear thought before she feels something startlingly hot and slick press into the cleft of her labia. She has no time to be startled. The Blue Suns lieutenant grabs her hips and yanks her back in the same instant he shoves the full length of his cock into her body. Shepard does not scream. She bites her lip until her mouth is full of blood again and thinks about the taste of Garrus’ tongue in that instant before she punctured hers on his teeth
( ... )
Part 6 (non-con warning)
anonymous
June 5 2011, 08:38:17 UTC
Her eyes blur with tears, reactive and saline hot. Her skin is dripping sweat now, her body shaking and trembling now, her knees hurt, the inside of her pussy feels like someone put a fist up there and now there’s another turian behind her. He shoves her thighs apart, spreads the damp folds of her sex and shoves something into her that is not a penis and, goddamn him, she screams. Once. She stifles herself with her hand as the merc fucks her with what must be the barrel of a rifle. She tries, for some reason, to guess at the caliber of the weapon
( ... )
Part 7 fin (non-con warning)
anonymous
June 5 2011, 08:51:03 UTC
The mercs retreat but, oh, sweet providence, they forgot about her. Shepard lunges naked and bloody onto the nearest turian and rips his jaw off with a blast of raw biotics. She punches his face until the bone caves in, until she’s punching nothing but a smear of gristle and calcium and pulp into the concrete. She turns to see a man point a gun at her, but half his skull comes off as Garrus guns down everyone in the fucking room stupid enough to have taken their fucking armor off
( ... )
Re: Part 7 fin (non-con warning)
anonymous
June 5 2011, 12:44:04 UTC
Jesus Christ, Anon. That was possibly definitely the most brutal rapefic I've ever read. Seriously. Wow. The fact that it was brilliantly written only made it that much worse. I can't imagine anyone getting off to this, but somehow I doubt that's what you were going for.
In other words, congratulations! Any writer that can make this jaded anon feel physically ill is a good writer in my book. You should be proud of this story. Not even kidding.
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anonymous
June 6 2011, 15:19:43 UTC
Wow. Just wow. Amazingly well written. Very real, very disturbing and rich in emotions - I couldn't tear myself away from the monitor till I finished reading.
Re: Part 7 fin (non-con warning)
anonymous
June 18 2011, 04:54:24 UTC
i wish that i had words. i wish that i could tell you what you just did to me, right there. there is something so fucking beautiful in what you just wrote, in all of that horror.
and you just fucking broke my heart.
this is. my gods. there are no words.
now I'm going to go read it again and hope that i don't have to stop in the middle to re-compose myself.
Re: Part 7 fin (non-con warning)
anonymous
January 29 2014, 04:51:13 UTC
So I know this comment is like 2 years too late, but is there any chance A!A planned on showing us the aftermath of all this. Because this was amazing. It was SO fucked up, and so raw, but beautifully written at the same time. The flow of Shepard's consciousness was just amazing.
I doubt A!A is still even around to read this, but I just had to say what a great story. And I truly would love to read the aftermath of all this. I really really would.
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This is her last clear thought before she feels something startlingly hot and slick press into the cleft of her labia. She has no time to be startled. The Blue Suns lieutenant grabs her hips and yanks her back in the same instant he shoves the full length of his cock into her body. Shepard does not scream. She bites her lip until her mouth is full of blood again and thinks about the taste of Garrus’ tongue in that instant before she punctured hers on his teeth ( ... )
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Damn. Reading that is like eating candy floss mixed with ground glass.
I'm literally crying over here. I don't do that often.
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In other words, congratulations! Any writer that can make this jaded anon feel physically ill is a good writer in my book. You should be proud of this story. Not even kidding.
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Really.
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and you just fucking broke my heart.
this is. my gods. there are no words.
now I'm going to go read it again and hope that i don't have to stop in the middle to re-compose myself.
fuck...
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I doubt A!A is still even around to read this, but I just had to say what a great story. And I truly would love to read the aftermath of all this. I really really would.
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