The Apocrypha of Chuck: Part 4/5

Sep 10, 2009 00:30

Title: The Apocrypha of Chuck (Part 4/5)
Characters: Chuck, Castiel/Dean, Bobby, Sam
Ratings/Warnings: R for smut and duck facts/Takes place just after S4 finale
Word Count: 7200
Summary: Chuck retreats into his newly romancified happy-verse when things get difficult. The happy-verse gets happy in the pants. Real life comes knocking, and Chuck ( Read more... )

apocrypha of chuck, fic: supernatural

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ibroketuesday September 10 2009, 08:46:08 UTC
You balance the comedy and the seriousness so, so well, and to such great effect. Chuck sacrificing himself in the end was lovely - I hope he's okay! - and the friendship between him and Castiel is so dear.

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maskedfangirl September 10 2009, 23:03:27 UTC
Thank you so much. I was worried the comedy/serious wouldn't work.

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littlehollyleaf September 10 2009, 10:20:16 UTC
!!!

Oh noes! Chuck!

I am too keyed-up to give a proper comment, I'll try again after the last part.

OMG! What's gonna happen??

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maskedfangirl September 10 2009, 23:04:12 UTC
:)

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aenissesthai September 10 2009, 17:42:18 UTC
This is an utterly delightful story, and I get more caught up in it every chapter. Some lines are just sheer genius, like "trickster time loop of softcore gay porn" and "fallen angel penis names." You have such a perfect take on poor Chuck and his low self-esteem mixed with witty pop culture references. Lord of the Rings! Honey, I Shrunk the Kids! (Sam causing a Giant Man-Tears flood, hee!)

Woven cleverly through the comedy are moments of real emotion, such as Castiel's growing friendship with Chuck, and of course, the cliffhanger ending. Poignant and perfect Serenity reference; Chuck truly is an unsung hero, like Mr. Universe.

Looking forward to the final chapter.

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maskedfangirl September 10 2009, 23:06:48 UTC
*blushes* Thank you! I hope you like the last chapter.

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arabella_w September 10 2009, 18:52:20 UTC
OMG!!!!! Chuck!!!!
I was so happy he got a friend to share pop culture references with and then this!!!
He can't die!

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maskedfangirl September 10 2009, 23:09:28 UTC
Can and did. Dead forever. End of fic!

:P

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blualbino September 10 2009, 22:03:01 UTC
WHAT. NO. (sneaky serenity reference. i see what you did there.) CHUCKKKKKKK, DON'T DIE!

And I giggled like a maniac at the part with the duck penises.

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maskedfangirl September 10 2009, 23:10:30 UTC
I'm surprised that so far nobody's been like "OMG EW DUCK PENISES WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU." This fandom is a hardy bunch when it comes to penis factoids, I guess.

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blualbino September 10 2009, 23:23:24 UTC
We probably would be, if it wasn't so hilarious. C'MON, PENIS SWORD FIGHTING.

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maskedfangirl September 10 2009, 23:36:14 UTC
Apparently flatworms also engage in penis fencing.

The More You Know! *rainbow*

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