The Shape of Things to Come (Part 4)

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Title: The Shape of Things to Come (Part 4)
Author: Nienna
Fandom: Thoroughbred
Disclaimer: All characters, story lines, etc. belong to Joanna Campbell, Harper Collins, and the other illustrious authors.
Rating: PG-13 for malas palabras
Characters: Christina and Melanie, with special guest Brad Townsend
Setting: Future fic

A/N: Argh, I realize it'

Comments

[syriinx]

LOVE. Seriously, I would draw little hearts around this if I could. This section is by far my favorite, and not just because Brad Townsend appears and is so awesome it's hard to fully comprehend such a level of awesome he routinely exhibits. I think I nearly died when he commented on Christina's bag. That...was about the last thing I ever expected to see come out of his mouth!

This is a really quiet, mature story. The backstory for Melanie and Christina is drawn convincingly here, and I'm really interested to see where you take this. I'm also dying to know where Parker is, and Sam and so forth.

But, yeah, I just have to say that this is awesome. I fully love it. Love!

[mask_and_mirror]

Thank you, I'm so glad to hear it! I've already got Parker pegged in his backstory and I'm *really* anxious to get to that part, although I do probably have to get through some more Melanie angst beforehand.