1.) Who is this about? -Quite a few people, actually. I took various bits and pieces of the things I felt and thought about various people I know and care about.
2.) What is this about? -It's really about some of the frustrations I have in my life right now. Well actually, I have these frustrations most of the time. I sometimes find myself embittered and misanthropic because I am not wanted by anyone, and I (of course) assign the blame to others. However, I really know that it is my fault that I am unwanted, and become disgusted with myself for all my weaknesses. I also wrote it because I hadn't written any shitty poetry in such a long time, or done anything creative, and shitty poetry is just so quick and simple.
The first part is three haikus (each being three lines each), and then four stanzas of unmetered, four-line verse. Then there is the final six-line, unmetered stanza, which kind of came out of nowhere, and the last line is inspired by a Strawberry Alarm Clock song called Nightmare of Percussion.
I thank you, honestly; far too kind of a compliment however.
It would be like me writing about a time I took a dump, and you saying the same thing. No offense to you, I just think that my shitty poetry is shitty. No?
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-Quite a few people, actually. I took various bits and pieces of the things I felt and thought about various people I know and care about.
2.) What is this about?
-It's really about some of the frustrations I have in my life right now. Well actually, I have these frustrations most of the time. I sometimes find myself embittered and misanthropic because I am not wanted by anyone, and I (of course) assign the blame to others. However, I really know that it is my fault that I am unwanted, and become disgusted with myself for all my weaknesses. I also wrote it because I hadn't written any shitty poetry in such a long time, or done anything creative, and shitty poetry is just so quick and simple.
The first part is three haikus (each being three lines each), and then four stanzas of unmetered, four-line verse. Then there is the final six-line, unmetered stanza, which kind of came out of nowhere, and the last line is inspired by a Strawberry Alarm Clock song called Nightmare of Percussion.
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It would be like me writing about a time I took a dump, and you saying the same thing. No offense to you, I just think that my shitty poetry is shitty. No?
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