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(Gundam Wing) From Open Water

Jun 05, 2009 10:48

'From Open Water'
Author: Masamune Reforged
Disclaimer: I don't own Gundam Wing or the characters.
Characters: Relena, Katherine (Dorothy too)
Warning: All audiences, Gen fic, friendship

For gw500 's challenge #269 'free'

( Anyone can be a fisherman in May )

gundam wing, relena, gen fic, catherine

Comments 2

schizoid_sprite June 5 2009, 02:34:03 UTC

I love metaphors. :)
I hope you write more genfics, especially with the gw girls in it. You write them well.

masa_reforged June 5 2009, 03:01:16 UTC

aw thank you so much! like i said, this was my first time really trying to focus on just some of the girls... but, yeah, the yaoi-only ship has pretty much sailed for me, so it probably will be more genfics in the future.

and on your story, i honestly thought the drunkness came out well, but there's something about conversation that, if i can't follow the thought process, i just get a little vexed. call me a control freak (i am). but yeah, thank you again for the feedback!