I wish I had Four & Sarah DvDs...I have to pilfer my fix of them from the internet. 'Course, I might have some type of giddy-ness overload at finally being able to listen to an audio commentary by Tom and Lis...
The whole thing was written to put a 'd'aww' fix out there, if it succeeded in that, I'm glad :)
Oh, poor Special Snowflake Sullivan--he does tend to step in it rather a lot, doesn't he? Dear fellow. I quite sympathize with him here. :)
And the worry and nervousness with Sarah and the Doctor was too adorable for words. Love love love it. Especially the nose bumping. (And not just because I am in love with Tom Baker's nose. I swear.) And so true to SJ's character that she immediately loses the embarrassment when she gets angry. :)
Lastly, while I want to emphasize that I really really loved this story, there are a bunch of small typos. Do you have a beta? Most of them were small enough that I skimmed right past them on the first reading, but it does kind of break up the flow when a verb's missing, or when you write 'enthusiast' instead of 'enthusiastic.'
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The whole thing was written to put a 'd'aww' fix out there, if it succeeded in that, I'm glad :)
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And the worry and nervousness with Sarah and the Doctor was too adorable for words. Love love love it. Especially the nose bumping. (And not just because I am in love with Tom Baker's nose. I swear.) And so true to SJ's character that she immediately loses the embarrassment when she gets angry. :)
Lastly, while I want to emphasize that I really really loved this story, there are a bunch of small typos. Do you have a beta? Most of them were small enough that I skimmed right past them on the first reading, but it does kind of break up the flow when a verb's missing, or when you write 'enthusiast' instead of 'enthusiastic.'
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Thank you for the review :)
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