(Good Protoman! Have a cookie!) *pats Blues on the head and gives him a huge cookie*
(Hooray for Yaito, survivor of the Suey's awesome power!) *gives Yaito a cookie just as big as the one she gave Blues*
(Awww, but I thought you wanted attention from other boys, Suey. Are they not deserving of your holy glory?) Of course not, cause only Chaud is good enough for teh sue! *gags and collapses*
The influx of Sues to this fandom is a little too much for exe_policeforce, originally created to handle this problem, to handle. Such a shame the fandom is killed by dub-named Sues.
I'll kick the mod into fixing the ability to join next time I see her. We have a few members who are willing to go after fics reported, so it is worth a shot, if I can get it so you can join. XD
I can't really express in English what disturbs me about this sentence. All I know is that it's WRONG to write something like that in the kind of story this wannabe-cuteness massacre tries to be. I know that in Animes there are standard expressions that have names. But... but... you don't use the names to describe the expressions in a written story! *imagine desperate whine* That's where I lack the English to explain why, but you just don't!
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*pats Blues on the head and gives him a huge cookie*
(Hooray for Yaito, survivor of the Suey's awesome power!)
*gives Yaito a cookie just as big as the one she gave Blues*
(Awww, but I thought you wanted attention from other boys, Suey. Are they not deserving of your holy glory?)
Of course not, cause only Chaud is good enough for teh sue! *gags and collapses*
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Your community sounds interesting though. I'm thinking of joining, 'cept the e-mail for approval doesn't work.
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hee, mind if i join that community? ^^ *fangirl*
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I can't really express in English what disturbs me about this sentence. All I know is that it's WRONG to write something like that in the kind of story this wannabe-cuteness massacre tries to be.
I know that in Animes there are standard expressions that have names. But... but... you don't use the names to describe the expressions in a written story! *imagine desperate whine* That's where I lack the English to explain why, but you just don't!
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